OK, how does this sound?
After reviewing my mom and FMIL's requests and preferences I think I got it to a place that everyone will at least be ok with. But I've looked at it so many times that now I can;'t even tell if it sounds ok or isn't even remotely alright. Let me know what you think please...
(keep in mind- my parents are divorced so mom wanted her and dad's names to be on separate lines, and mom INSISTED that we can't say 'request the honor of your presence' because its not at a house of worship)
Miss Felice last name
Mr. Joel last name
and
Mr. and Mrs. Paul last name
Request the pleasure of your company as they celebrate the marriage of their children
Meredith Carrie
to
Jonathan
Sunday, November 14th, 2010
Manhattan Penthouse
New York, New York
Chuppah at 5:45PM
Cocktails, dinner and reception to follow
(keep in mind- my parents are divorced so mom wanted her and dad's names to be on separate lines, and mom INSISTED that we can't say 'request the honor of your presence' because its not at a house of worship)
Miss Felice last name
Mr. Joel last name
and
Mr. and Mrs. Paul last name
Request the pleasure of your company as they celebrate the marriage of their children
Meredith Carrie
to
Jonathan
Sunday, November 14th, 2010
Manhattan Penthouse
New York, New York
Chuppah at 5:45PM
Cocktails, dinner and reception to follow
