Ok I am about to order the invitations!

FutureJOC Posted: Nov 15, 2010 06:27 PM

Ok I am about to order the invitations!

Could you girls please proof read this again to make sure that everything is written correctly (no spelling/grammatical errors).

I also posted what will be written on the reception card and the RSVP card so proof that for me as well.

I think it's fine but I'm just getting anxiety that I am overlooking something!

AwaitingAugust Posted: Nov 15, 2010 06:32 PM

Re: Ok I am about to order the invitations!

three minor things:
1. i don't think you're supposed to use commas in the date on the invitation itself
2. the 'accepting' and 'declines' are in different tenses (or whatever that's called) ... it should be 'Accepts' and 'Declines'
3. i don't like that it says CH will begin 'promptly' ... i feel like it should just say the time, without the word 'promptly'. Promptly makes it seem like you have no faith in your guests.

otherwise, looks good

FutureJOC Posted: Nov 15, 2010 06:34 PM

Re: Ok I am about to order the invitations!

Posted by AwaitingAugust

three minor things:
1. i don't think you're supposed to use commas in the date on the invitation itself
2. the 'accepting' and 'declines' are in different tenses (or whatever that's called) ... it should be 'Accepts' and 'Declines'
3. i don't like that it says CH will begin 'promptly' ... i feel like it should just say the time, without the word 'promptly'. Promptly makes it seem like you have no faith in your guests.

otherwise, looks good

thank you! And I am actually going to take all your pointers and change them.

bebita0830 Posted: Nov 15, 2010 06:34 PM

Re: Ok I am about to order the invitations!

They look good to me, I like how u used 'honour' it sounds more sophisticated!

I noticed u didn't put zip codes, I guess there not really necessary.

FutureJOC Posted: Nov 15, 2010 06:35 PM

Re: Ok I am about to order the invitations!

Posted by bebita0830

They look good to me, I like how u used 'honour' it sounds more sophisticated!

I noticed u didn't put zip codes, I guess there not really necessary.

I never really see the zipcodes on invitations I've received so I just followed in suit