Okay - please help me make this sound pretty?

As people leave the wedding we are giving them a bag with a mug, bunuelo and a breast cancer bookmark. Since the majority of our guest won't know what a bunuelo is I wanted to include a description as well as a note letting out guest know about the donation. How does this sound? Please please edit!


To our family and friends,

This package includes a buñuelo which is a fried dough ball which is served in Colombia as a christmas treat, however it is popular year round for breakfast with a cup of coffee. So here we have given you a mug for your coffee and a delicious buñuelo for breakfast. The best way to eat it is warmed - simply put it in a toaster oven just long enough to be warmed throughout.
We have also included a breast cancer awareness bookmark to represent a donation that has been made to the National Breast Cancer Foundation.

Thank you so much for coming to our wedding. We hope you had a great time!

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Posted by meghan13


To our family and friends,

This package includes a buñuelo which is a fried dough ball which is served in Colombia as a christmas treat, however it is popular year round for breakfast with a cup of coffee. So here we have given you a mug for your coffee and a delicious buñuelo for breakfast. The best way to eat it is warmed - simply put it in a toaster oven just long enough to be warmed throughout.
We have also included a breast cancer awareness bookmark to represent a donation that has been made to the National Breast Cancer Foundation.

Thank you so much for coming to our wedding. We hope you had a great time!

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To our family and friends,

This package includes a bunuelo, a fried dough ball. They are traditionally enjoyed around Christmas in Colombia, but are yummy all year round. Our favorite way to have it is with a cup of coffee at breakfast. While you're making your coffee just warm the bunuelo in the toaster over and enjoy!
Also Included is a breast cancer awareness bookmark representing the donation made on your behalf to the National Breast Cancer Foundation.

Thank you, for sharing in our special day, and for the memories that will last us a lifetime.

(lol i dont know how to put the little squiggly line above the 'n') hope that helps...