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leesah85 Posted:

okay so...

so I've decided to go with the burgundy.



I just messed around with it in paint, so it's not perfect - not a photoshopper here . but i've added 'black tie preferred' to the bottom and took out our last names because I don't want them there.



and then i changed the wording and the ceremony time



what do you guys think of the new wording/layout/etc.???
allornil Posted:

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I pretty much love it!

IrishAli Posted:

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Do you think black tie preferred is needed?

I like the larger names.

I don't like the wording change at the end, I think it looks too crowded. The wording change is fine, just not all on the same line. I think the middle one is best. If you removed black tie preferred, you could get your new wording on two lines.

Also, the grammar stickler that I am, I don't love that the invite starts with the word 'Because'. But that is just me.
leesah85 Posted:

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Okay, so I split up the lines. What do we think of this one?


IrishAli Posted:

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Yeah! I think it keeps the text within the same general area, and it reads better!

leesah85 Posted:

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Posted by IrishAli

Yeah! I think it keeps the text within the same general area, and it reads better!



Thanks!!!
Moonmist09 Posted:

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i think the revised version looks amazing!

kshea23 Posted:

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love it!

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