ordering invites need your opinions.....POLL

I wrote this fro our invites but steve likes a different variation...what do you think......

MINE

Today i marry my love,
The one i will be with forever
walk hand in hand, and side by side
all the days of my life....
Together with our parents we,
Heather
and
Steve
Invie you to share in our wedding day
On the twenty fourth of may
two thousand and 8
blah blah blah

HIS
Today WE marry OUR loves,
The one WE will be with forever
walk hand in hand, and side by side
all the days of OUR LIVES....
Together with our parents we,
Heather
and
Steve
Invie you to share in our wedding day
On the twenty fourth of may
two thousand and 8
blah blah blah

I like mine better of course lol i just think it sounds better what do u think?????
Please vote and if u like please tell me why u voted that way. Thanks!