Please DON'T proof read my RL invite

MikeandJess Posted: May 05, 2008 03:59 PM

Please DON'T proof read my RL invite

I already screwed up my invitations b/c no one proof read them so I'm asking you girls to please proof read my invites, including the directions!! I suck at giving directions so I'm not sure if they make sense. I took out the rsvp info because I didn't want to post personal info on the internet but it basically says please rsvp to [email protected] or call (555) 555-5555

MikeandJess Posted: May 05, 2008 04:11 PM

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I thought reverse psychology might work

bluegreen08 Posted: May 05, 2008 04:15 PM

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will edit this post if i catch anything else but:

1. you have 'p.m' and i would either add another period after m, or remove them both. i think the periods are correct though

2. looks like you have an extra space before ristorante, check on that

3. be consistent in your directions, you spell out 'parkway' in some places but not in others

4. if that's it for your direction page, i'd space it a little lower so it's more centered on the page between top and bottom

5. put a period after 25A because you have periods at the end of all of your other sentences

*disclaimer: i am awful with directions so i didnt proof them for content

Espo22 Posted: May 05, 2008 04:15 PM

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besides the p.m thing seems good

dancinmyazoff Posted: May 05, 2008 04:16 PM

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I looked at it Jess and they look pretty but believe me I'm the last person you want proofing anything lol!!

FinallyEngaged Posted: May 05, 2008 04:16 PM

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i was going to say perfect... i didnt even catch the p.m thing!

MikeandJess Posted: May 05, 2008 04:19 PM

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I knew my psychology degree would pay off for something. Thanks girls! I'm editing right now.

mathteach Posted: May 05, 2008 04:19 PM

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Maybe put the day of the week on it. And also for the first set of directions, how do they get to Bell Blvd from Northern Blvd?

Medinatobe Posted: May 05, 2008 04:25 PM

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Besides the comments already made, looks perfect to me. btw, good choice with Cascarino's, they're food is delicious.

MikeandJess Posted: May 05, 2008 04:35 PM

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Posted by mathteach

Maybe put the day of the week on it. And also for the first set of directions, how do they get to Bell Blvd from Northern Blvd?

would it be saturday, september 13th or saturday september 13th?

MikeandJess Posted: May 05, 2008 04:36 PM

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Posted by Medinatobe

Besides the comments already made, looks perfect to me. btw, good choice with Cascarino's, they're food is delicious.

thanks! We're there all the time, we're addicted to their white pasta fagiole and chicken staiano, it's like crack.

mathteach Posted: May 05, 2008 04:37 PM

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Posted by MikeandJess

Posted by mathteach

Maybe put the day of the week on it. And also for the first set of directions, how do they get to Bell Blvd from Northern Blvd?

would it be saturday, september 13th or saturday september 13th?

with the comma