Please help me proofread my invitation

kimNanthony Posted: Nov 14, 2007 01:01 PM

Please help me proofread my invitation

Also, should there be a comma after 'together with our families'

davenjess Posted: Nov 14, 2007 01:02 PM

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yes, there should be a comma.

missliss Posted: Nov 14, 2007 01:03 PM

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I had the same question once, and I decided to just look over all the websites and there's usually not a comma after that. But it's up to you.

kimNanthony Posted: Nov 14, 2007 01:14 PM

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Thanks! Anything else?

davenjess Posted: Nov 14, 2007 01:17 PM

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not as far as I can tell -you are good to go darlin!

Mizzdimple Posted: Nov 14, 2007 01:26 PM

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maybe im weird but your saying:

Together with our families we request the honour of your presence when

Kimi & Anthony

Like your saying we request when we marry..

get me ? im confusing!

jonsgirl04 Posted: Nov 14, 2007 01:31 PM

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I think it could go either way. If you dont put one I dont think it will matter. Otherwise I think its perfect! Good Job!

kimNanthony Posted: Nov 14, 2007 02:15 PM

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Posted by Mizzdimple

maybe im weird but your saying:

Together with our families we request the honour of your presence when

Kimi & Anthony

Like your saying we request when we marry..

get me ? im confusing!

I'm confused. LOL. We are trying to invite our guests so thats why we used 'we' We are paying for the wedding and planning everything so we just included and our families.

JoesFutureWife Posted: Nov 14, 2007 02:34 PM

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It is perfect....my sister had the same saying and there was no comma. As an English teacher, you may add a comma or exclude it. Either way is acceptable!