Please help proof read!

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Posted by ILOVEBRIAN2008

im not the best proof reader but it looks good to me!!

and ur getting married 4 months before me at the same place so u NEED to post a review asap

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Posted by MrsDtoBe

Are you excluding periods?

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Posted by Brian and Marie

Its perfect...no periods on your invite!

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Posted by snwb08

are the parents helping with the wedding? if not, i would leave the 'together with their parents' but get rid of the names. If so, then leave as is - I think its just hard to picture but i'm sure on the actual invitation it will look great!

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Posted by snwb08

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Posted by Brian and Marie

Its perfect...no periods on your invite!

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i agree no periods![/QUOTE

Thank you!

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Posted by ama1771

We are starting our invites and I was hoping that you could help proof read the wording and punctuation. Also should I be capitalizing any other words? Thanks in advance!

P.S. my parents are remarried that's why are there three sets of parents listed.



Angela XXXXX XXXXXX
and
Joshua XXXXXXX XXXXXX,
together with their parents,
Mr. & Mrs. William XXXXXX,
Mr. & Mrs. Mark XXXXXX
and
Mr. & Mrs. Steven XXXXXX,
invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
Saturday, the twenty-sixth of April
Two thousand and eight
at six o’clock in the evening
Larkfield Manor
507 Larkfield Road
East Northport, New York
*Formal reception immediately following




Also, FH thinks it should read
'invite you to share in THEIR joy'
I think it should be 'the' joy
what do you think?

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Posted by ama1771

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Posted by ama1771

We are starting our invites and I was hoping that you could help proof read the wording and punctuation. Also should I be capitalizing any other words? Thanks in advance!

P.S. my parents are remarried that's why are there three sets of parents listed.



Angela XXXXX XXXXXX
and
Joshua XXXXXXX XXXXXX,
together with their parents,
Mr. & Mrs. William XXXXXX,
Mr. & Mrs. Mark XXXXXX
and
Mr. & Mrs. Steven XXXXXX,
invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
Saturday, the twenty-sixth of April
Two thousand and eight
at six o’clock in the evening
Larkfield Manor
507 Larkfield Road
East Northport, New York
*Formal reception immediately following




Also, FH thinks it should read
'invite you to share in THEIR joy'
I think it should be 'the' joy
what do you think?

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Posted by Brian and Marie

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Posted by ama1771

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Posted by ama1771

We are starting our invites and I was hoping that you could help proof read the wording and punctuation. Also should I be capitalizing any other words? Thanks in advance!

P.S. my parents are remarried that's why are there three sets of parents listed.



Angela XXXXX XXXXXX
and
Joshua XXXXXXX XXXXXX,
together with their parents,
Mr. & Mrs. William XXXXXX,
Mr. & Mrs. Mark XXXXXX
and
Mr. & Mrs. Steven XXXXXX,
invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
Saturday, the twenty-sixth of April
Two thousand and eight
at six o’clock in the evening
Larkfield Manor
507 Larkfield Road
East Northport, New York
*Formal reception immediately following




Also, FH thinks it should read
'invite you to share in THEIR joy'
I think it should be 'the' joy
what do you think?

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I think it sounds fine either way! It's really up to you guys to decide! IMO, I actually agree with your husband.

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