Please help proof read!

I think it's perfect, I would put their joy instead though. I am wording my invites the exact same way.

This is being picky, but it came up a while back on the 07 boards

you don't really need the 'and' in two thousand and eight. I know many girls don't really care about that, but when you say the year you really shouldn't have an 'and'- it means a decimal.