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Please proof my invitation!!

AtticaQT Posted:

Please proof my invitation!!

Miss Georgia Xxxxx
and
Mr. Pantelis Xxxxx
together with their parents
request the honour of your presence
to share in the celebration of their marriage
on
Sunday, the Ninth of January
Two Thousand and Five
at Two O'clock in the afternoon
St. Demetrios Greek Orthodox Cathedral
Astoria, New York


Which words should be capitalized? Should the time be capitalized?
prindia Posted:

Re: Please proof my invitation!!

I really don't know but go to www.verseit.com and they have all of the wordings the way it should be

NYC04 Posted:

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I think Two in Two o'clock should not be capitalized.

Also, if you want to be grammatically correct, write two thousand five
Sonicstef Posted:

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It might sound better to put 'Together with their parents,' before your names. It also might look better b/c your names will be framed in the invitation but other smaller words.

JenniferLee111204 Posted:

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i think i agree that the first line would look better as Together with their parents...


also, the T in two shouldnt be capitalized and

btw. in all of my books, ALL the invites say two thousand and four - i think you can go either way, but again, all of the books that i looked in, said it with and.

jennifer
AtticaQT Posted:

Re: Please proof my invitation!!

thanks for the responses girls

JacnRob729 Posted:

Re: Please proof my invitation!!


Posted by NYC04

I think Two in Two o'clock should not be capitalized.

Also, if you want to be grammatically correct, write two thousand five




we had a big debate about this. My aunt is a math specialist. She said the only time that you say 'and' in a number is when there is a decimal. This is true when you think about it. But almost ALL of the invitations say and. I think it is acceptable either way!
mlkweekend Posted:

Re: Please proof my invitation!!

Together with their parents
Miss Georgia Xxxxx (larger font)
and
Mr. Pantelis Xxxxx (larger font)
request the honour of your presence
to share in the celebration of their marriage
Sunday, the ninth of January
Two thousand and five
at two o'clock in the afternoon
St. Demetrios Greek Orthodox Cathedral
Astoria, New York
shelly_l Posted:

Re: Please proof my invitation!!


Posted by AtticaQT

Miss Georgia Xxxxx
and
Mr. Pantelis Xxxxx
together with their parents
request the honour of your presence
to share in the celebration of their marriage
on
Sunday, the Ninth of January
Two Thousand and Five
at Two O'clock in the afternoon
St. Demetrios Greek Orthodox Cathedral
Astoria, New York


Which words should be capitalized? Should the time be capitalized?



I do this for a living ... with my edits

Together with their parents
Ms. Georgia Xxxxx
and
Mr. Pantelis Xxxxx
request the honour of your presence
to share in the celebration of their marriage
Sunday the ninth of January
Two thousand and five
at two o'clock
St. Demetrios Greek Orthodox Cathedral
Astoria, New York
AtticaQT Posted:

Re: Please proof my invitation!!

thanks for the input everyone!

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