Please Proof Read my Invitation wording

Please tell me if this wording looks good!! Everything will be centered on the actual invitation.

THANKS!!!

Oh and Fh's parents are divorced but FMIL still keeps ex husbands name- am I supposed to spell out their names instead of saying Mr. & Mrs...

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The harmony of love meets with the melody of life to create our beautiful love song…

Mr. & Mrs. Smith
cordially invite you to the marriage of their daughter

Adelya
to
Gerard

son of Mr. & Mrs. Johnson

Sunday, the fifth of June
Two thousand and eleven
at three quarters past five o’clock in the evening
Woodbury Country Club
884 Jericho Turnpike
Woodbury, NY

Reception to follow
Black Tie Attire Preferred

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Also, we are not doing traditional RSVP cards as you can see so our RSVP card will say the following:
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Please RSVP by April 23, 2011 on
the Couple’s Wedding Website:

Mywedding.com/AdelyaGerard
Wedpass: ********
For questions call the Bride at:

everything seems good to me. Maybe add your middle names if you both have them?

looks good to me.

yay ur rsvp date is my wedding date

looks good.
as far as teh divorced thing, I am having it say


son of
Mr. Smith
and Mrs. Smith

instead fo Mr. and Mrs smith.

but honestly, I don't know what right. That's what I have seen in the past. I am going to ask my invite girl when I see her next!

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Posted by mrsq2be

looks good.
as far as teh divorced thing, I am having it say


son of
Mr. Smith
and Mrs. Smith

instead fo Mr. and Mrs smith.

but honestly, I don't know what right. That's what I have seen in the past. I am going to ask my invite girl when I see her next!

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i was actually thinking the same thing...my parents are divorced so i think i would write

Mr. John Smith and Mrs. Jane Smith

instead of Mr. and Mrs. Smith

JMO though

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Posted by futurestevens

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Posted by mrsq2be

looks good.
as far as teh divorced thing, I am having it say


son of
Mr. Smith
and Mrs. Smith

instead fo Mr. and Mrs smith.

but honestly, I don't know what right. That's what I have seen in the past. I am going to ask my invite girl when I see her next!

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i was actually thinking the same thing...my parents are divorced so i think i would write

Mr. John Smith and Mrs. Jane Smith

instead of Mr. and Mrs. Smith

JMO though

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ITA

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Posted by LaBellaVita622

I don't now why but I remember someone telling me FH's last name should be on it because your parents are 'introducing' him?? did anyone else ever hear of this?

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I've heard the same thing. Usually since in this case the brides parents are hosting, you don't include her last name, but still include his last name, along with his parents' names.

also, take out the 'and' in two thousand eleven.

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Posted by adelya21

Please tell me if this wording looks good!! Everything will be centered on the actual invitation.

THANKS!!!

Oh and Fh's parents are divorced but FMIL still keeps ex husbands name- am I supposed to spell out their names instead of saying Mr. & Mrs...

---------------------------
The harmony of love meets with the melody of life to create our beautiful love song…

Mr. & Mrs. Smith
cordially invite you to the marriage of their daughter

Adelya
to
Gerard

son of Mr. & Mrs. Johnson

Sunday, the fifth of June
Two thousand and eleven
at three quarters past five o’clock in the evening
Woodbury Country Club
884 Jericho Turnpike
Woodbury, NY

Reception to follow
Black Tie Attire Preferred

------------------------------

Also, we are not doing traditional RSVP cards as you can see so our RSVP card will say the following:
-------------------------------

Please RSVP by April 23, 2011 on
the Couple’s Wedding Website:

Mywedding.com/AdelyaGerard
Wedpass: ********
For questions call the Bride at:

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I would change his parents to 'Mr. Johnson and Mrs. Johnson' - keep it separate since they're divorced.

I think Lsorrent did this on her invitation because her parents are divorced but mom still kept the name? Might be thinking ofsomeone else though...

Otherwise, looks great to me!



ETA: Jsut saw that this was already discussed. Sorry!

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Posted by LaBellaVita622

I don't now why but I remember someone telling me FH's last name should be on it because your parents are 'introducing' him?? did anyone else ever hear of this?

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this is correct, your FH last name should be listed as well on the invite, unless you really don't want it on there