Please proofread my invite before I order!

JamDancer Posted: Jun 10, 2009 02:42 PM

Please proofread my invite before I order!

These will be the actual invite card inside my pocketfolds... does it look ok? Anything I need to/should change?

Thanks!

CandB4604 Posted: Jun 10, 2009 02:53 PM

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Looks good to me - do you have a separate reception card, i'd imagine?

littlepixie12 Posted: Jun 10, 2009 02:56 PM

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It looks good, you have seperate inserts right? there isnt anything else I would add

springsandra Posted: Jun 10, 2009 03:05 PM

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It's very lovely!

It took me 3 times reading it through to figure out why there were all those ------ 's... oops!

Guess my brain is fried today!

But everything else looks great!

JamDancer Posted: Jun 10, 2009 03:12 PM

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hahaha yea the paranoid in me took out the last names... hehe

and yes I have separate inserts for Directions, Accomodations, Reception, and RSVP.... this is just going to be the card glued onto a matte glued onto the pocketfold. I found these that fit perfectly into it and match the dark purple pocket :)

Gracie821 Posted: Jun 10, 2009 03:23 PM

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Ok I do not know if I am wrong or right here, but for your name it just is your name, but before your FH's name it says 'Mr.' Is that how it is supposed to be? Other than that, they are really beautiful!!!

Gracie821 Posted: Jun 10, 2009 03:23 PM

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Posted by JamDancer

hahaha yea the paranoid in me took out the last names... hehe

and yes I have separate inserts for Directions, Accomodations, Reception, and RSVP.... this is just going to be the card glued onto a matte glued onto the pocketfold. I found these that fit perfectly into it and match the dark purple pocket :)

That sounds so pretty!

JamDancer Posted: Jun 10, 2009 03:26 PM

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Posted by SoonToBeMrsR

Ok I do not know if I am wrong or right here, but for your name it just is your name, but before your FH's name it says 'Mr.' Is that how it is supposed to be? Other than that, they are really beautiful!!!

hmm, I thought it was supposed to be like this... so do I take the 'Mr.' out in front of his name? Anyone?

coldasice217 Posted: Jun 10, 2009 03:27 PM

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Posted by SoonToBeMrsR

Ok I do not know if I am wrong or right here, but for your name it just is your name, but before your FH's name it says 'Mr.' Is that how it is supposed to be? Other than that, they are really beautiful!!!

I agree, I've never seen it worded exactly this way before. I don't think it's bad per se, just not sure if it's 'proper' for the couple to have titles. Other than that, everything looks good.

Gracie821 Posted: Jun 10, 2009 03:44 PM

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Posted by JamDancer

Posted by SoonToBeMrsR

Ok I do not know if I am wrong or right here, but for your name it just is your name, but before your FH's name it says 'Mr.' Is that how it is supposed to be? Other than that, they are really beautiful!!!

hmm, I thought it was supposed to be like this... so do I take the 'Mr.' out in front of his name? Anyone?

I have never seen it, but please check it out before you listen to me, I could be totally wrong. Sorry if I'm not helpful!

JamDancer Posted: Jun 10, 2009 09:27 PM

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bump

lilmartha59 Posted: Jun 10, 2009 10:17 PM

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everything looks good to me...the only double take i did was on the MR. if it was me i would probably take it out but i dont think its bad to leave it in

dedecakes Posted: Jun 10, 2009 10:42 PM

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Posted by SoonToBeMrsR

Ok I do not know if I am wrong or right here, but for your name it just is your name, but before your FH's name it says 'Mr.' Is that how it is supposed to be? Other than that, they are really beautiful!!!

ITA! I would take out 'Mr'.

JamDancer Posted: Jun 10, 2009 10:45 PM

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Now that everyone is mentioning it, it DOES look strange to me! lol- not sure where I got that from, I must've seen one like that somewhere. But I think I'll like it better without :)

JamDancer Posted: Jun 11, 2009 10:14 AM

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ok one more question, sorry, Should I put FH's last name or just First & Middle?

LadyDuda81509 Posted: Jun 11, 2009 10:16 AM

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as long as all the names are spelt correctly looks good to me!!

very pretty invite!

julesrbf Posted: Jun 11, 2009 11:42 AM

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Also, should be four o'clock.

Otherwise, looks very nice! I don't see any other issues.

lilmartha59 Posted: Jun 11, 2009 12:38 PM

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Posted by JamDancer

ok one more question, sorry, Should I put FH's last name or just First & Middle?

i think since you have the parents last names you're fine...i didnt have our parents on it so i had to use last names for us

in my opinion if you're using only your first name he should too