Please tell me what you think....

Here is my invitation wording

does this make it less formal
i wanted a little warmth to it...


You have shared in their lives
through your friendship and love
Now, with great joy
Mr. and Mrs. xxxxx xxxxxxx
invite you to join them in celebrating the marriage of their daughter
xxxx xxxxx
to
xxxx xxxxx
son of Mr. and Mrs. xxxx xxxxxx
Saturday, the thirtieth of April
Two thousand and five
at seven o'clock in the evening
At Land's End
Sayville, New York






Reply:

We look forward to celebrating with you!
Please respond by .........

___ Wouldn't miss it for the world!
___ Sorry we just can't make it (or We regret that we cannot attend!)
which one?

we regret we can not attend sounds better to me too.

(the wording is beautiful)

we regret that we can not attend.

i like the wording on top - very nice!

I like the wording as well.. very nicely stated//

I agree... we regret we cannot attend sounds better

Thanks so much girls..


is it
we regret we will not be able to attend????