Proof my Invitation please!!! MissLiss - you're an invite wiz! WITH PICTURE

LuvMyAlfonse Posted: Apr 01, 2008 03:16 PM

Proof my Invitation please!!! MissLiss - you're an invite wiz! WITH PICTURE

I'm not concerned with caps b/c it's the block lettering so I really don't care - you can barely tell what's capped and what isn't. But if you see something, say something. (hehehe I kill me).

Should the parent's names be in script too? Is spelling and everything OK?

Should it be Jennifer Ann AND Alfonse Frank or is it right as Jennifer Ann TO Alfonse Frank?

Thanks so much girls! I totally effed up our eparty invite so I want to make sure this one is right!

anneandchris Posted: Apr 01, 2008 03:21 PM

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Jenn it looks good. One thing -- is it St. Patrick or St. Patrick's?

I think Jennifer TO Alfonse is correct.

ETA: My sister is Jennifer Anne too only Anne with an e

LuvMyAlfonse Posted: Apr 01, 2008 03:24 PM

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Posted by anneandchris

Jenn it looks good. One thing -- is it St. Patrick or St. Patrick's?

I think Jennifer TO Alfonse is correct.

ETA: My sister is Jennifer Anne too only Anne with an e

Was she born in 79? Us Jennifers ruled the 80s!!!!

I don't know about St Pat's. Let me check their letterhead - good point, thanks Anne!

LuvMyAlfonse Posted: Apr 01, 2008 03:26 PM

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Figures - their letterhead says 'The Parish of St. Patrick', but - their web is stpatricksbayshore.org.

So I guess is St Pat's.

Annoulak Posted: Apr 01, 2008 03:26 PM

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if you want you could put
'request the honour of your presence' all on 1 line instead of 2...it's a preference thing

missliss Posted: Apr 01, 2008 03:26 PM

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You give me too much credit!

But honestly, it looks perfect. And no, your parents names should not be script, only yours and Alfonse's. But your grammar, spelling and date line are all correct.

missliss Posted: Apr 01, 2008 03:30 PM

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one thing....IF SPACE ALLOWS so not a big deal at all if it doesn't, but if it does......add a line/space in between the time and the name of the church.

Also, don't know how you're doing your RSVP cards, but if you're using similar wording, remember to spell favour of a reply with the 'ou' to match honour.

LuvMyAlfonse Posted: Apr 01, 2008 03:45 PM

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bump for picture

and here's our response set proof:

LuvMyAlfonse Posted: Apr 01, 2008 03:46 PM

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thanks Alissa! I knew you'd come through...

I think it's spaced OK - I had it converted and posted a pic...

I guess the only thing that's wrong is the church...

beachbum05 Posted: Apr 01, 2008 03:58 PM

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I like 'and' better than 'to'

But thats just me

missliss Posted: Apr 01, 2008 04:02 PM

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Posted by LuvMyAlfonse

thanks Alissa! I knew you'd come through...

I think it's spaced OK - I had it converted and posted a pic...

I guess the only thing that's wrong is the church...

lol.

Love your RSVP wording, it's so cute!

what colors are you doing????

ChristineAaron08 Posted: Apr 01, 2008 04:09 PM

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Posted by beachbum05

I like 'and' better than 'to'

But thats just me

i like AND also

sounds weird to me the other way but im just a long guylander so w t f do i know about propper grammer

LuvMyAlfonse Posted: Apr 01, 2008 04:10 PM

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This is the invite - it's a light blue. It's all shimmer.

BM dresses are light blue. I have an appt Thursday to see my sample CP - I'll take pics - it's hot pink, and orange and yellow and lime green - totally tropical. I can't wait to see it!!!

And the girls bouquets are almost identical to these (they'll be fuller and have roses as well):

futuremrsfab Posted: Apr 01, 2008 04:23 PM

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I think 'and' between your names but otherwise looks good & your invite is so pretty

anneandchris Posted: Apr 01, 2008 04:24 PM

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Love the invite Jenn and the flowers.

No my sister is older born in 72!

missliss Posted: Apr 01, 2008 05:07 PM

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Posted by LuvMyAlfonse

This is the invite - it's a light blue. It's all shimmer.

BM dresses are light blue. I have an appt Thursday to see my sample CP - I'll take pics - it's hot pink, and orange and yellow and lime green - totally tropical. I can't wait to see it!!!

And the girls bouquets are almost identical to these (they'll be fuller and have roses as well):

I love it. All of it.