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proof read my invitations please! CHANGED SOME!!

ant n tilde Posted:

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Posted by Snickers76


Posted by ant n tilde


Posted by Lools

Looks and sounds good!
Just one question:
Did you mean for the line to read 'share in THE joy' or 'share in THEIR joy' ?



i stole this from a website and it had THE joy although i guess both could work

thanks for asking though bc the guy that works at the place wrote it out - i had it typed up so he could have definitely made that mistake!



I was also thinking 'Their,' but both can work...

Wow...08ers are already creating their invites...



my guest list was already sent to the printer to print the envelope and this will be sent after the weekend!
luna bride x Posted:

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Posted by ant n tilde

thank you so much girls - i just read about a typo on 07 so i wanted to post!

also do you think it will look funny since it is
Matilde SNOWFLAKE Anthony
instead of having an 'AND'?



no way i think it'll look great
ant n tilde Posted:

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thank you so much girls!

Kimbalina Posted:

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OMG!!! This is sooo exciting!! I cant believe us 08ers are getting started on the invites!!

They look great to me!
LuvMyAlfonse Posted:

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Posted by ant n tilde

thank you so much girls - i just read about a typo on 07 so i wanted to post!

also do you think it will look funny since it is
Matilde SNOWFLAKE Anthony
instead of having an 'AND'?



that did cross my mind but only b/c 'snowflake' is written out, kow what I mean - so I visualized your invite and 'it's beautiful in my eyes....'
ant n tilde Posted:

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Posted by LuvMyAlfonse


Posted by ant n tilde

thank you so much girls - i just read about a typo on 07 so i wanted to post!

also do you think it will look funny since it is
Matilde SNOWFLAKE Anthony
instead of having an 'AND'?



that did cross my mind but only b/c 'snowflake' is written out, kow what I mean - so I visualized your invite and 'it's beautiful in my eyes....'



thanks

yeah i was reading it to someone over the phone and said it out loud and it sounded dumb!
DiamondPipa Posted:

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Posted by ant n tilde


Posted by DiamondPipa

they look fine to me! I was talking to someone the other day and she told me that she put on her invites number of guests: ___of #

#=the number she invited from that family. (ex. she invited husband and wife, no kids invite would say number of guests: ___of 2). thought that was pretty cool.



so did she hand write that in? that is a good idea



you know, i don't know, i didnt ask that question!!! I was just kinda shocked b/c i never heard of that.
Papillon25 Posted:

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Where are these from?

I am doing a snowflake theme too.
ant n tilde Posted:

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Posted by Papillon25

Where are these from?

I am doing a snowflake theme too.



the invitations are from Elite Weddings II

i ordered them from Gifts of Love in Queens.

i must have looked through 12 books and I found about 3 snowflake invitations and the other two were cheesy!
yelley77 Posted:

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I can't believe you are ordering your invites!!! It's coming so fast!! Us 08ers will be married before we know it!!

PS, the invite looks great!!
Snowflake08 Posted:

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Looks great Matilde
But on the response, someone told me to put 'before' instead of 'by'

its up to you , but thats what i did
Snowflake08 Posted:

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Posted by Snowflake08

Looks great Matilde
But on the response, someone told me to put 'before' instead of 'by'

its up to you , but thats what i did


BTW, my invitations are by Elite also!!!!
AND i have 5 little snowflakes on them
bella1028 Posted:

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wow...they look great and the wording seems perfect
Mrs. V 2008 Posted:

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looks good and i love your invitations tilde, they are beautiful!!!!
ant n tilde Posted:

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Posted by Snowflake08

Looks great Matilde
But on the response, someone told me to put 'before' instead of 'by'

its up to you , but thats what i did



thanks for the suggestion maybe i will do that!
i have to fax it back when i am done

thanks for all your help ladies!
dream426 Posted:

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Looks good to me. Wow I can't believe some of us are ordering invitations already. So exciting.
rdaw Posted:

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Looks great. I noticed one thing though...Where you have the date written i think it should be a lowercase E for the 'eight' in Two thousand eight. I believe this is unless you capitalize the whole thing: 'Two Thousand Eight'.

TGs Lady 22908 Posted:

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It looks great!! I love your invitations.

On a slightly OT note: I just can't believe that we are at the point where girls are proof-reading invites!!! SO EXITING!!!!

GinaBambina08 Posted:

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OMG, so exciting! An 08er doing her invitations! (great wording by the way!)
Toucan311 Posted:

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I think it should say 'share in their joy'

but thats just the english professor in me talking

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