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proof read my invitations please! CHANGED SOME!!

ant n tilde Posted:

proof read my invitations please! CHANGED SOME!!







here are the changes:
RSVP CARD:

We look forward to celebrating with you

Please reply before December 10, 2007


M_______________________________
Number of persons ____



RECEPTION CARD:



Please join us for cocktails, dinner and dancing
at seven-thirty in the evening

Jericho Terrace
Mineola, New York




here are the invitations:

LuvMyAlfonse Posted:

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everything looks good to me!

:thumbs up:
DCLM726 Posted:

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It looks good to me!

DiamondPipa Posted:

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they look fine to me! I was talking to someone the other day and she told me that she put on her invites number of guests: ___of #

#=the number she invited from that family. (ex. she invited husband and wife, no kids invite would say number of guests: ___of 2). thought that was pretty cool.
ant n tilde Posted:

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Posted by DawnSNY

so, on the 'number of persons line', they put a 0 if they can't attend? Just making sure :)

I see no spelling errors though!



yeah that is what the lady said. . . do you think it is too confusing? LOL
ant n tilde Posted:

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Posted by DiamondPipa

they look fine to me! I was talking to someone the other day and she told me that she put on her invites number of guests: ___of #

#=the number she invited from that family. (ex. she invited husband and wife, no kids invite would say number of guests: ___of 2). thought that was pretty cool.



so did she hand write that in? that is a good idea
Collweenie21 Posted:

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I think it's perfect, and not at all confusing!

LuvMyAlfonse Posted:

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Posted by ant n tilde


Posted by DawnSNY

so, on the 'number of persons line', they put a 0 if they can't attend? Just making sure :)

I see no spelling errors though!



yeah that is what the lady said. . . do you think it is too confusing? LOL



no, if they get confused they'd probably hand write in - 'can't make it'
ant n tilde Posted:

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Posted by LuvMyAlfonse


Posted by ant n tilde


Posted by DawnSNY

so, on the 'number of persons line', they put a 0 if they can't attend? Just making sure :)

I see no spelling errors though!



yeah that is what the lady said. . . do you think it is too confusing? LOL



no, if they get confused they'd probably hand write in - 'can't make it'



funny story - my aunt and uncle dont get along with some of their cousins so when my cousin sent out the invite they RSVPd back. . .and on the RSVP they used a black sharpie and wrote NO!! in HUGE letters on each side!!

mature right!
Lools Posted:

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Looks and sounds good!
Just one question:
Did you mean for the line to read 'share in THE joy' or 'share in THEIR joy' ?
ant n tilde Posted:

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Posted by Lools

Looks and sounds good!
Just one question:
Did you mean for the line to read 'share in THE joy' or 'share in THEIR joy' ?



i stole this from a website and it had THE joy although i guess both could work

thanks for asking though bc the guy that works at the place wrote it out - i had it typed up so he could have definitely made that mistake!
LuvMyAlfonse Posted:

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Posted by ant n tilde

funny story - my aunt and uncle dont get along with some of their cousins so when my cousin sent out the invite they RSVPd back. . .and on the RSVP they used a black sharpie and wrote NO!! in HUGE letters on each side!!

mature right!



I'd cry if I received that on my wedding RSVP card...
chrispar Posted:

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Looks and sounds great! Can't wait to see the finished product!!!

ant n tilde Posted:

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Posted by LuvMyAlfonse


Posted by ant n tilde

funny story - my aunt and uncle dont get along with some of their cousins so when my cousin sent out the invite they RSVPd back. . .and on the RSVP they used a black sharpie and wrote NO!! in HUGE letters on each side!!

mature right!



I'd cry if I received that on my wedding RSVP card...



actually we didnt show it to my cousin - when we saw the post office it was sent from we knew who it was from so we opened it - we didnt tell her until after the wedding how they wrote it
ant n tilde Posted:

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thank you so much girls - i just read about a typo on 07 so i wanted to post!

also do you think it will look funny since it is
Matilde SNOWFLAKE Anthony
instead of having an 'AND'?
Snickers76 Posted:

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Posted by ant n tilde


Posted by Lools

Looks and sounds good!
Just one question:
Did you mean for the line to read 'share in THE joy' or 'share in THEIR joy' ?



i stole this from a website and it had THE joy although i guess both could work

thanks for asking though bc the guy that works at the place wrote it out - i had it typed up so he could have definitely made that mistake!



I was also thinking 'Their,' but both can work...

Wow...08ers are already creating their invites...
luna bride x Posted:

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looks good!

camerakrazie Posted:

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everything looks fine to me

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