Proof Readers Needed!

We are going to be ordering invites with in the next week or so,, please CHECK the below items and see if I am missing something-


Because you have shared
In our lives with your
Friendship and love, we

Kimberly XXX
and
Greg XXX

Together with our parents
Invite you to share our joy as we
Exchange Marriage vows
On Saturday
The Eighth of November
Two Thousand and Eight
at Five o'clock in the Evening at
Bay Shore United Methodist Church




Then for the RSVP card

We look forward to celebrating with you.
Please reply by October 1st

M___________________________

___ Accepts with pleasure
___ Declines with regret

Should be the
Eighth of November!

ETA: I'd also have the coma before your names be after 'love' and not after 'we'... I think
AND in the RSVP card.. should be forward, and not foward.

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Posted by ttw910

You just need to change Eight to Eighth.

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Got it! Thank you!!!

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Posted by Maria31

Should be the
Eighth of November!

ETA: I'd also have the coma before your names be after 'love' and not after 'we'... I think

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as in
Friendship and Love, We

it should be 'forward' not foward

also something small but you can put five o'clock

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Posted by Kimbalina

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Posted by Maria31

Should be the
Eighth of November!

ETA: I'd also have the coma before your names be after 'love' and not after 'we'... I think

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as in
Friendship and Love, We

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Yes, I think that reads better but I could be wrong.
I also found something else...
On the RSVP card.. it should be forward, and not foward. Other than that, looks good to me!!!

I agree with all the suggestions and have none to add...

Sounds great Kim!

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Posted by Espo22

it should be 'forward' not foward

also something small but you can put five o'clock

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Got it!!!

Thank you!

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Posted by Maria31

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Posted by Kimbalina

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Posted by Maria31

Should be the
Eighth of November!

ETA: I'd also have the coma before your names be after 'love' and not after 'we'... I think

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as in
Friendship and Love, We

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Yes, I think that reads better but I could be wrong.
I also found something else...
On the RSVP card.. it should be forward, and not foward. Other than that, looks good to me!!!

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Ok, great!!

Thank you! I appreciate the help!

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Posted by SB7308

No need to capitalize Joy & Look (on the RSVP)

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Thank you!! Fixed that!

Looks good Kim.

Love the wording.

We just orderd on Saturday and I wasn't feeling creative and am not really happy with the way the wording was.

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Posted by KK Holiday

sounds lovely Kim!

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Thank you!!!

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Posted by SparkyandAng

Looks good Kim.

Love the wording.

We just orderd on Saturday and I wasn't feeling creative and am not really happy with the way the wording was.

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Ohhhh Nooo!!! That stinks! Any way to change it, since it was only a few days ago?

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Posted by Kimbalina

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Posted by SB7308

No need to capitalize Joy & Look (on the RSVP)

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Thank you!! Fixed that!

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Welcome!

What about putting this on one line?
Saturday, The Eighth of November

Will it fit?

Kim, i love it!! sounds great.

But you have certain words capitalized and I don't think they should be..

Because you have shared
In our lives with your
Friendship and Love


Parents

Marriage

Evening

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Posted by yelley77

Kim, i love it!! sounds great.

But you have certain words capitalized and I don't think they should be..

Because you have shared
In our lives with your
Friendship and Love


Parents

Marriage

Evening

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Ok,, changed those items