Proof Readers Needed!

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Posted by JB1122

Declines with REGRET (not regrets)

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ok,.. thank you!!!

I'm not really good with invite ettique (? spelling) but I think it might be regret instead of regrets on the rsvp card. Other than that, looks perfect to me.

ok, never mind someone just posted this and i missed it.

I have a suggestion that may make it flow better.

Instead of

Because you have shared
In our lives with your
Friendship and love, we

Kimberly XXX
and
Greg XXX

Together with our parents


What about this:

Because you have shared
In our lives with your
friendship and love,
together with our parents, we

Kimberly XXX
and
Greg XXX

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Posted by kimNanthony

I have a suggestion that may make it flow better.

What about this:

Because you have shared
In our lives with your
friendship and love,
together with our parents, we

Kimberly XXX
and
Greg XXX

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I like the wording! Thank you I have to show it to FH!
Thank you

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Posted by Kimbalina

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Posted by kimNanthony

I have a suggestion that may make it flow better.

What about this:

Because you have shared
In our lives with your
friendship and love,
together with our parents, we

Kimberly XXX
and
Greg XXX

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I like the wording! Thank you I have to show it to FH!
Thank you

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No problem. FH and I used this wording also. We used:

Together with our families (or parents)
we request the honour of your presence when

Kimberly XXX
and
Anthony XXX
exchange marriage vows.

Thanks! I saw this before and notebooked it.

I typed up and printed out the diffrent 'editions' and we are going to have to make up our minds!

Thank you for all your help everyone!