proof this quiick please

Edited :) hows that now?



Say You'll Share With Me
One Love, One Lifetime...



Ms. Doris Ramsdell requests the honor of your presence
at the wedding of her daughter


Jennifer Lee Ramsdell

to

Jonathan Andrew Staples


Son of Mr. and Mrs. Randy Staples


Saturday, the Twenty Sixth of July
Two Thousand and Eight
At Eleven o’clock in the morning


St. Mary’s Church
East Islip, New York




Adult Only Reception Immediately Following















The Favor of a Reply is Requested
before June 26, 2008

M__________________________
___Accepts with Pleasure
___Number Attending
___Declines with Regret

put a comma after Saturday

and maybe put the year on a separate line?

One Liftime
Take out 'Adult Only' just put Adult Reception Immediately to follow.

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Posted by Jamnike


Say You'll Share With Me
One Love, one Lifetime...



Ms. Doris Ramsdell requests the honor of your presence
at the wedding of her daughter


Jennifer Lee Ramsdell

To

Jonathan Andrew Staples


Son of Mr. & Mrs. Randy Staples


Saturday the Twenty Sixth of July Two Thousand and Eight
At Eleven o’clock in the morning


St. Mary’s Church
East Islip, New York




Adult Only Reception Immediately Following




The Favor of a Reply is Requested
before June, 26, 2008

M__________________________
___Accepts with Pleasure
___No. Attending
___Declines with Regret

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The O in the 2nd 'one' in the quote on top should be capital and the 'To' between your names should not i don't think...

Other then that it looks good!

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Posted by Espo22

it should be the favour of a reply

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if you write 'favour' than you should change 'honor' to 'honour' for the sake of consistency

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Posted by Annoulak

rather than the & sign, spell out 'and'

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true

its funny how we all noticed different things haha, its good togive it to a group of ppl to see first bc one person will notice something the other doesnt

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Posted by Annoulak

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Posted by Espo22

it should be the favour of a reply

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if you write 'favour' than you should change 'honor' to 'honour' for the sake of consistency

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YES i agree, didnt even notice honour was spelled honor lol

capitalize the O in the quote
lowercase the T in to
replace & with and
spell out 'number' instead of 'No.'
take out the comma after June

I would also put the year on its own line

love the phantom quote

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Posted by Espo22

it should be the favour of a reply

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sorry, already posted

spell out the full name - Randy - unless that is the full name

to instead of To

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Posted by snwb08

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Posted by Espo22

it should be the favour of a reply

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only if she also has 'honour'... she has honor

spell out the full name - Randy - unless that is the full name

to instead of To

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yeah i just said above i didnt notice she had honor. So my suggestion is honor to honour and favor to favour

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Posted by bluegreen08

i agree...

capitalize the O in the quote
lowercase the T in to
replace & with and
spell out 'number' instead of 'No.'

I would also put the year on its own line

love the phantom quote

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lol you guys are good!!! I had it all right and th en the comp messed it up and saved it in the wrong format!! so i had to re do it!!

this line is also alot longer than all the lines

Ms. Doris Ramsdell requests the honor of your presence

Saturday the Twenty Sixth of July
Two Thousand and Eight
At Eleven o’clock in the morning


If everything else is capitalized maybe caps Morning? or make some of the other parts lower case?

ours was all caps so I dont remember what it should be ... just make it consistent

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Posted by Espo22

this line is also alot longer than all the lines

Ms. Doris Ramsdell requests the honor of your presence

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how would you space it?? it looks funny if i make it 3 lines...but idk, im dyslexic and suck at this stuff

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Posted by Jamnike

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Posted by Espo22

this line is also alot longer than all the lines

Ms. Doris Ramsdell requests the honor of your presence

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how would you space it?? it looks funny if i make it 3 lines...but idk, im dyslexic and suck at this stuff

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i dont think it looks funny if you make it 3 lines because it balances out the rest of the invite, but that's just a matter of your preference. i dont think there is a right or wrong