Mrs. XXXXXX Requests the Honour of Your Presence At the Nuptial Mass Uniting her Daughter
Meaghan and Michael John
Son of Mr. and Mrs. XXXXXXXX
In the Sacrament of Holy Matrimony On Sunday, the Twenty-Ninth of July Two Thousand and Seven At Half After Three in the Afternoon
XXXXX Roman Catholic Church XXXXX, New York
JayLi2007
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I would write: her daughter Meaghan to Michael, not and.
Meaghan729
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i read that if its a catholic mass , you are supposed to use and... I had 'to' - should i change it back?
GiJoe07
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Posted by Meaghan729
i read that if its a catholic mass , you are supposed to use and... I had 'to' - should i change it back?
I've heard that too... I think you should use 'and'
Meaghan729
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thanks - i appreciate both of your help!!
JayLi2007
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I have no idea...I'm Jewish!
alymikewedding08
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I vote to use the word TO instead of AND
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JayLi2007
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Also, I dont think in Two Thousand and Seven the thousand and seven should be capitalized, and same thing with Twenty-Ninth. Go look at a few online.
JayLi2007
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Actually, like nothing should be capitalized. Only like names, day of week, place. Just look at a few invites online. I know mine are not, and I did not make them myself. That is how the invitation company and the lady I worked with told me it was done.
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I think you have too much stuff capitalized that shouldn't be. I'm not sure about the whole 'and' thing?? JMO. HTH
This is what I would do:
Mrs. XXXXXX Requests the honour of your presence At the Nuptial Mass uniting her daughter
Meaghan and Michael John
Son of Mr. and Mrs. XXXXXXXX
In the Sacrament of Holy Matrimony On Sunday, the twenty-ninth of July Two thousand and seven At half after three in the afternoon
XXXXX Roman Catholic Church XXXXX, New York
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Posted by FullersBride
I think you have too much stuff capitalized that shouldn't be. I'm not sure about the whole 'and' thing?? JMO. HTH
This is what I would do:
Mrs. XXXXXX Requests the honour of your presence At the Nuptial Mass uniting her daughter
Meaghan and Michael John
Son of Mr. and Mrs. XXXXXXXX
In the Sacrament of Holy Matrimony On Sunday, the twenty-ninth of July Two thousand and seven At half after three in the afternoon
XXXXX Roman Catholic Church XXXXX, New York
Actually I would also change 'half afte three' to 'half past three'
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thanks for the replys - im not too concerned about small things (past, after, capitals) as long as the spelling and everything is correct!!
