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Reception Card Wording Opinions

2010BTB Posted:

Reception Card Wording Opinions

Which Reception Card wording do you like:

#1 - Please join us as we celebrate the newlyweds at The Swan Club


7 o'clock in the evening


#2 - To help us celebrate, please join us for the reception at 7 o'clock in the evening

The Swan Club

Future Mrs H Posted:

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# 2

kris_gets_hitched Posted:

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1.
The 'to help us celebrate' line seems awkward to me.
jmgoncal Posted:

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Posted by kris_gets_hitched

1.
The 'to help us celebrate' line seems awkward to me.



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2010BTB Posted:

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Should it be to help us celebrate THE newlyweds or WITH the newlyweds?

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