RSVP Card Wording

The favour of a reply is requested on or before April 14,2007
M_______________________
__ Number of persons attending
__ Regretfully cannot attend
Please indicate if interested in complementary transportation to and from the wedding location, departing from Brighton
__ Interested
__ Not interested
Adult reception


What do we think of this?

no one????

that seems like a lot for the RSVP....can you make the other option like an insert or something?

i just realized, you have regretffully not attend..and the # of ppl...but not 'accepts with pleasure' or anything. is that on purpose?

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Posted by MJDoc12

that seems like a lot for the RSVP....can you make the other option like an insert or something?

i just realized, you have regretffully not attend..and the # of ppl...but not 'accepts with pleasure' or anything. is that on purpose?

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I wanted to put that on a separate card but I dont think ppl will look at it :(
I have 'number of persons attending' instead of 'accepts with pleasure', isn't that ok???

M______________ and

________________

will attend ___ in body
___ in spirit

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Posted by portjeffbride

M______________ and

________________

will attend ___ in body
___ in spirit

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Seriously???

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Posted by bettybcafe

I think its perfect. I think with people its sometimes best to put everything on one card...dont want them going crazy with a whole bunch of rsvp cards..

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I agree. i would put it all on one card to minimize all the unnecessary inserts. I think it sounds nice the way it is. And i love the comp. transportation from BRIGHTON

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Posted by milana

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Posted by bettybcafe

I think its perfect. I think with people its sometimes best to put everything on one card...dont want them going crazy with a whole bunch of rsvp cards..

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I agree. i would put it all on one card to minimize all the unnecessary inserts. I think it sounds nice the way it is. And i love the comp. transportation from BRIGHTON

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Hhehheheheeh. My daddy is the cutest! He insisted that Brooklyn = Brighton so we might as well put it down for the babushka's to be relieved they dont have to be driving 1.5 hours to get to my wedding

hehe...i know i agree. Im also having transportation for the babushka's that need it and theyre obviously being picked up on brighton

____Accept with pleasure
____Decline with Regret

thats sounds more better to me than

'__ Regretfully cannot attend'

- just my opinion

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Posted by milana

hehe...i know i agree. Im also having transportation for the babushka's that need it and theyre obviously being picked up on brighton

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where did you put that info? are you calling ppl individually???

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Posted by EverlovingEv

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Posted by milana

hehe...i know i agree. Im also having transportation for the babushka's that need it and theyre obviously being picked up on brighton

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where did you put that info? are you calling ppl individually???

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Yeah im calling them only b/c i dont have that many people since it's in the city its really not too far at all and only limited people will need it. My mom will make a list for me and she'll take care of that stuff herself by phone.

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Posted by milana

where did you put that info? are you calling ppl individually???

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Yeah im calling them only b/c i dont have that many people since it's in the city its really not too far at all and only limited people will need it. My mom will make a list for me and she'll take care of that stuff herself by phone.

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Gottcha. My parents are definitely taking care of all of the phone calls :)

The favour of a reply is requested before April 14,2007
M_______________________
__ Accepts with pleasure
____ persons
__ Declines with regret

Complimentary shuttle service will be provided to and from the reception hall from Brighton
__Interested in transportation


I changed it a little. I put before April 14, not 'on or before'. Changed the accepts and declines part. Changed shuttle info part. Complimentary was spelled wrong.
Adult reception is writton on reception card not RSVP card.

Hope i helped

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Posted by Jess5790

The favour of a reply is requested before April 14,2007
M_______________________
__ Accepts with pleasure
____ persons
__ Declines with regret

Complimentary shuttle service will be provided to and from the reception hall from Brighton
__Interested in transportation


I changed it a little. I put before April 14, not 'on or before'. Changed the accepts and declines part. Changed shuttle info part. Complimentary was spelled wrong.
Adult reception is writton on reception card not RSVP card.

Hope i helped

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Thanks! I'll run it by FI and see what he says.

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Posted by EverlovingEv

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Posted by Jess5790

The favour of a reply is requested before April 14,2007
M_______________________
__ Accepts with pleasure
____ persons
__ Declines with regret

Complimentary shuttle service will be provided to and from the reception hall from Brighton
__Interested in transportation


I changed it a little. I put before April 14, not 'on or before'. Changed the accepts and declines part. Changed shuttle info part. Complimentary was spelled wrong.
Adult reception is writton on reception card not RSVP card.
Hope i helped

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Thanks! I'll run it by FI and see what he says.

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I like the transportation checked only if interested and like this set up better it doesn't seem as wordy, some ppl get lazy reading! JMO

I like the first part....but what is the
__interested, __not interested??????
What is that?

ALso, what is 'adult reception?' If you don't say 'and family' on the address, people will know that children are NOT invited.

I think that 'the favour of a reply is requested by (date) and the number is enough.

RSVP:

The favour of a reply is requested by April 14,2007
M_______________________
__ Number of persons attending
__ Regretfully cannot attend

Please indicate if interested in complementary transportation to and from the wedding location, departing from Brighton Beach
__ Interested

Adult reception

I took off the 'not interested' at the bottom.

I really want to keep adult reception b/c even though the invite is addressed to TWO adults, I have some family members that absolutely positively will insist on dragging thier kids along.

I like this: __ Accepts with pleasure
____ persons
__ Declines with regret
but want to avoid putting 3 lines instead of two. Do you think I can put __ Accepts with pleasure____ persons all on one line?

Thanks girls!