Save the Date wording...

Any ideas or suggestions on what to put? I want something more than just save the date. TIA!

Mine are magnets. They say 'Please Save the Date for Julie & Ray's wedding. There is a picture of us, and a little calender with a heart around the date. Then on the bottom it says 'September 24, 2004'
'Formal Invitation To Follow'

He popped the question and she said yes!
So please save this date and be our guest