Soooo, this is where I want my e-party!!!

'Phat' bowling alley I said 'Phat' - like YO MOMMA!

So this is where I wanna have my e-party in March. Thanks to Bonita and her fab ideas (she suggested we get t-shirts made up) - I think I'm going to use those t-shirts to ask my BP - something cheesy (I am VERY cheesy) like 'will you be on my team?'

Will you ladies help me with invite wording.. please help me... This is what I have and it's too cheesy, even for me:

Bowled over with Love

For Jennifer and Alfonse, we'll 'spare' no expense,
Sunday, March 25th, the fun will commence.
When the clock 'strikes' 7pm, the pins will fall,
And you're invited to have a ball.
Gag me with a spoon.

Thanks girls!

Jenn, I think that's an awesome idea and I love the t-shirt idea!!!!
The wording for the invite isn't bad either... you're more of a poet than I am, that's for sure!

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Posted by LuvMyAlfonse

'Phat' bowling alley I said 'Phat' - like YO MOMMA!

So this is where I wanna have my e-party in March. Thanks to Bonita and her fab ideas (she suggested we get t-shirts made up) - I think I'm going to use those t-shirts to ask my BP - something cheesy (I am VERY cheesy) like 'will you be on my team?'

Will you ladies help me with invite wording.. please help me... This is what I have and it's too cheesy, even for me:

Bowled over with Love

For Jennifer and Alfonse, we'll 'spare' no expense,
Sunday, March 25th, the fun will commence.
When the clock 'strikes' 7pm, the pins will fall,
And you're invited to have a ball.
Gag me with a spoon.

Thanks girls!

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Just two small things -
Excuse my English teacher-ness, but, well, I'm an English teacher! I think 'ball' at the end should be in quotes, because it's also a play on words. And I'd get rid of 'PM' to preserve the meter of the 2nd line.

Bowled over with Love

For Jennifer and Alfonse, we'll 'spare' no expense,
Sunday, March 25th, the fun will commence.
When the clock 'strikes' 7, the pins will fall,
And you're invited to have a 'ball.'

Aww that sounds cute!!! I wish I though of this for my engagenment party. It looks like so much fun. And me and FH and my sis go bowling all the time. I even have my own ball and shoes. FH has a spiderman ball I got him for his B-day.

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Posted by perfectpair

looks like strike in New hyde park, that's a fun place

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I heart Strike, my FH threw me a surprise 25th bday party there - nothing like drunken go-karting!

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Posted by LuvMyAlfonse

'Phat' bowling alley I said 'Phat' - like YO MOMMA!

So this is where I wanna have my e-party in March. Thanks to Bonita and her fab ideas (she suggested we get t-shirts made up) - I think I'm going to use those t-shirts to ask my BP - something cheesy (I am VERY cheesy) like 'will you be on my team?'

Will you ladies help me with invite wording.. please help me... This is what I have and it's too cheesy, even for me:

Bowled over with Love

For Jennifer and Alfonse, we'll 'spare' no expense,
Sunday, March 25th, the fun will commence.
When the clock 'strikes' 7pm, the pins will fall,
And you're invited to have a ball.
Gag me with a spoon.

Thanks girls!

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thats really cute ... for my BM and MOH ... i made gift bags with useful stuff in and i got them all firends piture frames with a poem asking them to be my brides maid .. i also gave them each a flower of the one i'm having at the wedding ... i had them delivered ... also thats the way i told them i was engaged!!!! ...

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Posted by DavaDay

Just two small things -
Excuse my English teacher-ness, but, well, I'm an English teacher! I think 'ball' at the end should be in quotes, because it's also a play on words. And I'd get rid of 'PM' to preserve the meter of the 2nd line.

Bowled over with Love

For Jennifer and Alfonse, we'll 'spare' no expense,
Sunday, March 25th, the fun will commence.
When the clock 'strikes' 7, the pins will fall,
And you're invited to have a 'ball.'

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Thanks Dava, that's why I asked! Do you have any suggestions for the wording??? I can NOT send an invite like that out.....

Kim, it's TERRIBLE - it's me - you can be honest!!!

Jenn, look at it this way: if you're sending out an invite to a bowling party that includes plays on words with 'spare' and 'strike' etc... there's no way it's not going to sound cheesy. So embrace the cheese! Use bowling clipart on the invite. Maybe find a bowling scorecard and write your wedding date on it, stuff like that.

ok so i loooooooooooooooooove your idea.. its totally cute.. i just head this place advertised on the raido yesterday!!! and i loooove the wording.. i love cheese..hehehe def. give u 2 thumbs up!!!

Dava - AWESOME idea!

And thanks everyone for OK-ing my cheesiness!!! You girls are the best ever!!!!!

I frickin LOVE IT! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

Cheese it up baby!

CUTE IDEA