STD proof with pic! (version 2 from last week's)

runnerbride1023 Posted: Jan 05, 2010 01:24 PM

STD proof with pic! (version 2 from last week's)

I had the photog make a few changes to my STD and email the proof this time so it is much clearer than before.

What do you think?

AngnShaun Posted: Jan 05, 2010 01:25 PM

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it looks good... i would keep everything the same font

elisa112101 Posted: Jan 05, 2010 01:26 PM

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i agree about the font....

runnerbride1023 Posted: Jan 05, 2010 03:54 PM

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Posted by AngnShaun

it looks good... i would keep everything the same font

Ha Really? I actually like that part! LOL

AngnShaun Posted: Jan 05, 2010 03:55 PM

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Posted by RAK220

Posted by AngnShaun

it looks good... i would keep everything the same font

Ha Really? I actually like that part! LOL

LOL... then keep it... its you that has to like it, not us! LOL

runnerbride1023 Posted: Jan 05, 2010 04:07 PM

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Posted by AngnShaun

Posted by RAK220

Posted by AngnShaun

it looks good... i would keep everything the same font

Ha Really? I actually like that part! LOL

LOL... then keep it... its you that has to like it, not us! LOL

HAHA of course! Difference of opinions

brittndave Posted: Jan 05, 2010 04:09 PM

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i like the 2 font idea but i don't like the comic sans font that the date and stuff is in! i think maybe like a thinner, all caps font would look better with the first one

LouieDianna2010 Posted: Jan 05, 2010 04:10 PM

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ok so im here for critique only....curse me out if youd like afterwards... But i feel like it needs a little POP to it...Maybe add a little Color??? or Spruce up the font a bit??? LOVE the pics!! i think they work great together... !!

GiannisWifey Posted: Jan 05, 2010 04:13 PM

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Posted by LouieDianna2010

ok so im here for critique only....curse me out if youd like afterwards... But i feel like it needs a little POP to it...Maybe add a little Color??? or Spruce up the font a bit??? LOVE the pics!! i think they work great together... !!

ITA - I think the pics are awesome and you guys look great....I also like how they are different poses as well. I think it needs something? Maybe a colored border around the pics? or a colored font? maybe you can color the font of the date or your names so they stand out? JMO

shelbylove918 Posted: Jan 05, 2010 04:14 PM

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soo cute!!! love it:)

brittndave Posted: Jan 05, 2010 04:15 PM

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i do agree with the other girls about the POP! magnets don't stick to stainless steel fridges and the ones they do stick to are black or white so i feel like your std is going to blend in. i think you should add a little color

Chelechel1 Posted: Jan 05, 2010 04:17 PM

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Very cute, I like the photo strip a lot!

Clover23 Posted: Jan 05, 2010 04:19 PM

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loooove the pics and style! i have a major issue with comic sans as a font in general. it gives me the heebyjeebys.

runnerbride1023 Posted: Jan 05, 2010 04:27 PM

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Posted by LouieDianna2010

ok so im here for critique only....curse me out if youd like afterwards... But i feel like it needs a little POP to it...Maybe add a little Color??? or Spruce up the font a bit??? LOVE the pics!! i think they work great together... !!

critical is good! I don't take offense too easily don't worry. I'm actually not a color girl at all. I live in black and white and throw in beige and grey for some alternatives.

I'm not loving the font for the bottom either, but I do like the change in font between the top part and the bottom.

ETA: My photog printed out 2 samples of the original version and the magnets are heavy-duty! I am pyscho and tested them on a bunch of different fridges and they stuck! i think my parents have a stainless fridge - but could be wrong b/c it stayed.

GiannisWifey Posted: Jan 05, 2010 04:30 PM

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maybe a nice script?? scriptina???

LouieDianna2010 Posted: Jan 05, 2010 04:31 PM

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Posted by RAK220

Posted by LouieDianna2010

ok so im here for critique only....curse me out if youd like afterwards... But i feel like it needs a little POP to it...Maybe add a little Color??? or Spruce up the font a bit??? LOVE the pics!! i think they work great together... !!

critical is good! I don't take offense too easily don't worry. I'm actually not a color girl at all. I live in black and white and throw in beige and grey for some alternatives.

I'm not loving the font for the bottom either, but I do like the change in font between the top part and the bottom.

Ok well then if u want to keep it monotone then maybe play with graphics a bit. Theres nothing thats makign my eyes draw to your STD (OTHER THAN YOUR BEAUTIFUL PICTURES LOL) And the idea of Two different fonts is great. However Comic Sans is not the way to go. Comic Sans is almost TOO Generic.