'Together with their parents' wording

jessamyn78 Posted: Dec 10, 2007 06:30 PM

'Together with their parents' wording

Does it sound better if it is:

Together with their parents
Jessamyn
and
Vincent
blah blah blah blah blah

OR

Jessamyn
and
Vincent
Together with their parents
blah blah blah blah blah

???

debismom Posted: Dec 10, 2007 06:32 PM

Re: 'Together with their parents' wording

Posted by jessamyn78

Does it sound better if it is:

Together with their parents
Jessamyn
and
Vincent
blah blah blah blah blah

OR

Jessamyn
and
Vincent
Together with their parents
blah blah blah blah blah

???

Like the second one!!!!!! Mary MOB

Snick n Nick Posted: Dec 10, 2007 06:33 PM

Re: 'Together with their parents' wording

I like the first one better....

GinaBambina08 Posted: Dec 10, 2007 06:33 PM

Re: 'Together with their parents' wording

The second one..

jessamyn78 Posted: Dec 10, 2007 06:34 PM

Re: 'Together with their parents' wording

Oh no! I was hoping for everyone to pick the same one. This is going to be harder than I thought!!! I like the second one better because I think it sounds gramatically correct, but a lot of invite online have it the first way.

GinaBambina08 Posted: Dec 10, 2007 06:36 PM

Re: 'Together with their parents' wording

Posted by jessamyn78

Oh no! I was hoping for everyone to pick the same one. This is going to be harder than I thought!!! I like the second one better because I think it sounds gramatically correct, but a lot of invite online have it the first way.

yeah, you're right, I googled it after I answered you!

debismom Posted: Dec 10, 2007 06:37 PM

Re: 'Together with their parents' wording

Posted by jessamyn78

Oh no! I was hoping for everyone to pick the same one. This is going to be harder than I thought!!! I like the second one better because I think it sounds gramatically correct, but a lot of invite online have it the first way.

Why don't you take a poll? Mary MOB