what do we think of my RD invite

RitasEngaged Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:00 PM

what do we think of my RD invite

please proofread

RD Invite

SummerBride10 Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:02 PM

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I would put commas after Elmont and Franklin Square.

I like the design you choose!

jmgoncal Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:02 PM

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I think Rehearsal is spelled wrong...

SummerBride10 Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:03 PM

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Posted by jmgoncal

I think Rehearsal is spelled wrong...

just caught that too!!

RitasEngaged Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:03 PM

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Posted by SummerBride10

I would put commas after Elmont and Franklin Square.

I like the design you choose!

done and thanks

RitasEngaged Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:03 PM

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Posted by SummerBride10

Posted by jmgoncal

I think Rehearsal is spelled wrong...

just caught that too!!

fixed

soontobecruz Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:04 PM

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I think it is beautiful!!!

I would say
please join us for the rehersal OF Rita and Jason's wedding......

Then the church info then a note, something like....

Dinner immediately to follow at..... then the restaurant info.

very pretty invites though!

Lsorrent Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:05 PM

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Yup, the commas like Colleen said, and fix the spelling of rehearsal, and you're good to go!

RitasEngaged Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:05 PM

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Posted by soontobecruz

I think it is beautiful!!!

I would say
please join us for the rehersal OF Rita and Jason's wedding......

Then the church info then a note, something like....

Dinner immediately to follow at..... then the restaurant info.

very pretty invites though!

done

kerber981 Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:06 PM

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eta - sorry i commented on rehearsal as well but see you fixed it. otherwise very nice! i'd also say, please rsvp.

RitasEngaged Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:06 PM

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hold on

RitasEngaged Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:08 PM

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heres the new one

New RD invite

soontobecruz Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:09 PM

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looks and sounds good to me!

RitasEngaged Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:09 PM

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Posted by kerber981

eta - sorry i commented on rehearsal as well but see you fixed it. otherwise very nice! i'd also say, please rsvp.

i will add that thanks

Lsorrent Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:10 PM

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It's perfect Rita!

RitasEngaged Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:11 PM

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ok last one

i fixed the spacing on the bottom - tell me what you thinkfinal

soontobecruz Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:14 PM

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ok dont hate me and I *might* be wrong but looking at it again. Shoud RSVP have periods like R.S.V.P.?

I am pretty sure it is an acronym for something although I can't remember what at the moment

grkbarbie Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:14 PM

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Lsorrent Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:15 PM

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Posted by soontobecruz

ok dont hate me and I *might* be wrong but looking at it again. Shoud RSVP have periods like R.S.V.P.?

I am pretty sure it is an acronym for something although I can't remember what at the moment

It's an acronym for 'répondez s'il vous plaît', meaning 'please respond.'

But the periods aren't necessary.

soontobecruz Posted: Feb 05, 2010 10:16 PM

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Posted by Lsorrent

Posted by soontobecruz

ok dont hate me and I *might* be wrong but looking at it again. Shoud RSVP have periods like R.S.V.P.?

I am pretty sure it is an acronym for something although I can't remember what at the moment

It's an acronym for 'répondez s'il vous plaît', meaning 'please respond.'

But the periods aren't necessary.

Ok I wasn't 100% sure.....