What do you think of this Rehearsal Dinner poem?

Rehearsal Dinner

THE NIGHT BEFORE SARAH AND JOE SAY “I DO”
THEY’D LOVE TO CELEBRATE THEIR PRE-NUPTIALS WITH YOU!
PLEASE MEET PROMPTLY AT SIX AT ST. EDWARD’S CHURCH
TO PRACTICE WALKING DOWN THE AISLE - AND GET OUT ALL THE QUIRKS!
THEN IT’S OFF TO THE MARRIOTT TO DINE IN 'BALDINO’S'
FOR SOME FOOD, LAUGHTER, FRIENDS, FAMILY (AND VINO!)

HOSTED BY MRS. TURID XXXXX

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Posted by Chrissywish

great job...adorable...i love the and vino with the italian restaurant theme

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thanks! That was the hardest line to rhyme! (That... and church and quirks! )

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Posted by CLMon7906

I'd honestly say take out the 'their italian restaurant' only because it makes that line so long and cumbersome. 'Baldino's' sounds Italian and you've got that cute 'and vino' thrown in....i think it will flow better without it. Other than that, it's really cute.

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okay, so:

Rehearsal Dinner

THE NIGHT BEFORE SARAH AND JOE SAY “I DO”
THEY’D LOVE TO CELEBRATE THEIR PRE-NUPTIALS WITH YOU!
PLEASE MEET PROMPTLY AT SIX AT ST. EDWARD’S CHURCH
TO PRACTICE WALKING DOWN THE AISLE - AND GET OUT ALL THE QUIRKS!
THEN IT’S OFF TO THE MARRIOTT TO DINE IN 'BALDINO’S'
FOR SOME FOOD, LAUGHTER, FRIENDS, FAMILY (AND VINO!)

HOSTED BY MRS. TURID XXXXX

Good call!

Thanks!

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Posted by sarahradio5

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Posted by CLMon7906

I'd honestly say take out the 'their italian restaurant' only because it makes that line so long and cumbersome. 'Baldino's' sounds Italian and you've got that cute 'and vino' thrown in....i think it will flow better without it. Other than that, it's really cute.

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okay, so:

Rehearsal Dinner

THE NIGHT BEFORE SARAH AND JOE SAY “I DO”
THEY’D LOVE TO CELEBRATE THEIR PRE-NUPTIALS WITH YOU!
PLEASE MEET PROMPTLY AT SIX AT ST. EDWARD’S CHURCH
TO PRACTICE WALKING DOWN THE AISLE - AND GET OUT ALL THE QUIRKS!
THEN IT’S OFF TO THE MARRIOTT TO DINE IN 'BALDINO’S'
FOR SOME FOOD, LAUGHTER, FRIENDS, FAMILY (AND VINO!)

HOSTED BY MRS. TURID XXXXX

Good call!

Thanks!

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Love it!!!!!

beautiful!!!!

Its adorable

it's so cute...great job!

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Posted by KandE917

it's so cute...great job!

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thanks! okay.... I'm using it!!!