Which sounds better for the thank yous on programs?
IslandPrincess
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Which sounds better for the thank yous on programs?
'Marriage is not a culmination; it is a beginning. A beginning of life that will grow and change in ways more wonderful than we can imagine. Many years from now, when we look back on our life, love and this day, we will remember that flowers, music and food were not what made this day so special. It will be our memories of sharing the beginning of our life as husband and wife with you – Our friends and family. Having you here with us today has made our wedding truly wonderful.Understanding that life holds many momentous commitments, we thank you for sharing in one of our happiest.' OR 'We would like to thank our family and friends for sharing with us this first day of our life together. We feel especially blessed to have so many wonderful people in our lives. A special thanks to our parents for their love and support and for helping us to create this beautiful and special day in our lives.'
Thanks!
billandme
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I LOVE the first one! Very special
BellaEyes
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I really like the first one too. Very nice.
reenielady
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The first one it is very touching
AeroJenn
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I'm a little biased because I'm using it...but the first one is so touching.
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The first one is really great. Just change it to Family and Friends bc family always comes first!
IslandPrincess
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Thanks, I liked the first one too, but I didn't know if it sounded like I totally copied from somewhere (as in here lol) and if it was too formal. Thanks!
Kara and Todd
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Posted by JIFFY
The first one is really great. Just change it to Family and Friends bc family always comes first!
Agreed... And add the serial comma before the word and... Sorry, big pet peeve of mine - I know you copied it from somewhere else.
ETA - I think the first one is beautiful!
Shmar
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the first one is very touching!
laural2979
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I liked the second one much better, but that's just me.
ewickens
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#1 is unique and beautiful!
Soon2BeMrs
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#1 ...much more touching
hayleyandsteve
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