Please help me decide on which STD to send out. Also, any suggestions to make any of them better would be great. I was even considering changing the picture to black and white or sepia. What do you think? TIA!
THey are all cute but I like the 3rd personally. I also would add a location to it - just a general one like 'Long Island, NY' just so out of towners can have a sense of planning time.
also I am pretty sure there is no comma after the word Sunday. ..
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i like #3 because we can see your faces!
dedecakes
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Thank you for the advice. It is grammatically correct to have a comma after Sunday. However, people often don't use commas in formal invitations.
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3 is my fav. id add the location tho. very nice tho!
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I also like the 3rd one the best because I can see both of your faces
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I like #3 the best.
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#3
Liana
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#3
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I like #3 but I would keep the same font throughout t looks kinda weird with all the diff fonts
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I like the 3rd the best.
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#3 because it shows both your faces, very nice!
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i would go with #3. i saw someone mentioned the comma and you said its grammaticaly correct..i dont think alot of people know that (i didnt) so if you leave it in a majority of people are going to think its an error. just something to think about.
i like that you have your monogram on it
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Posted by CloudNine
i would go with #3. i saw someone mentioned the comma and you said its grammaticaly correct..i dont think alot of people know that (i didnt) so if you leave it in a majority of people are going to think its an error. just something to think about.
i like that you have your monogram on it
I have A LOT of teachers in my family, including myself. So, if it is not grammatically correct, I will hear about it.
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Posted by dedecakes
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i would go with #3. i saw someone mentioned the comma and you said its grammaticaly correct..i dont think alot of people know that (i didnt) so if you leave it in a majority of people are going to think its an error. just something to think about.
i like that you have your monogram on it
I have A LOT of teachers in my family, including myself. So, if it is not grammatically correct, I will hear about it.
oh lol then by all means do it the right way
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How about this? Does that look better b/c 'Sunday' is on a different line?
what if you just drop sunday completely and just have the date? my STD just has the date on it
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Because the whole point of sending out my STD is so that people know it's on a Sunday and to make arrangements to stay overnight...or they will either reply no b/c they don't want to go to LI on a Sunday or they will leave early. If I just put the date, people are not going to check to see what day it's on.
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ahh got ya. i like it with the sunday on a seperate line