Which wording do u like better for an e-party invite?

1) It started with a kiss
And now it’s all come down to this
In case you haven’t heard
Brian proposed and Jenise said, “Yes!”
So please join us in toasting their happiness



2)
Brian popped the question, “Will you be my wife?”
Jenise said, “I will love you for all of my life.”
That’s how it started and a party is due
So reserve this date, we’re inviting you!

I JUST did my invites (addressing, stamping, mailing)

I used number two but I did:

Sweeter than flowers, and more special too...
Are a bride and groom about to say 'I do'.
Brian popped the question, “Will you be my wife?”
Jenise said, “I will love you for all of my life.”
That’s how it started and a party is due
So reserve this date, we’re inviting you!

BUT, I like number 1 better - we received an invite like that from a neighbor so my mom didn't want to use it..

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Posted by LuvMyAlfonse

I JUST did my invites (addressing, stamping, mailing)

I used number two but I did:

Sweeter than flowers, and more special too...
Are a bride and groom about to say 'I do'.
Brian popped the question, “Will you be my wife?”
Jenise said, “I will love you for all of my life.”
That’s how it started and a party is due
So reserve this date, we’re inviting you!

BUT, I like number 1 better - we received an invite like that from a neighbor so my mom didn't want to use it..

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ohhh thanks for that idea i like that addition to number 2!

I used # 1 but changed it to:

It started with a kiss
Dom proposed and Liane said yes!
Please join us in celebrating the engagement of Dom and Liane

I like number 2. I think that the re-prahse that was posted for the replys was good too though,,,,

They are both cute, but I used
He came to her on bended knee
and asked her will you marry me
thay now have found their lifelong mate
and so its time to celebrate

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Posted by LuvMyAlfonse

I JUST did my invites (addressing, stamping, mailing)

I used number two but I did:

Sweeter than flowers, and more special too...
Are a bride and groom about to say 'I do'.
Brian popped the question, “Will you be my wife?”
Jenise said, “I will love you for all of my life.”
That’s how it started and a party is due
So reserve this date, we’re inviting you!

BUT, I like number 1 better - we received an invite like that from a neighbor so my mom didn't want to use it..

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I LOVE THAT! So cute

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Posted by jteach711

They are both cute, but I used
He came to her on bended knee
and asked her will you marry me
thay now have found their lifelong mate
and so its time to celebrate

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Aww, I really like this one! But of the two you posted, I like the second one best!

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Posted by lb9977

Wow the poll is dead even right now, I love number 2. I think it rocks. Go with number 2!!! You must be an english teacher to come up with these cute poems!

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im a teacher but i wish i came up with these!!! lol i searched it on here and found it!! lol

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Posted by jteach711

They are both cute, but I used
He came to her on bended knee
and asked her will you marry me
thay now have found their lifelong mate
and so its time to celebrate

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omg i love that one!!!!!! i wish i could edit my poll to add this one!