who wants to proofread my invite??

here it i girls,well the worrding at least lol
(dont mind the spacingand the making things in capital lol..i have to fix it)

Once in a while,
Right in the middle of an ordinary life,
Love gives us a fairytale.....
Together with their families
Gina L
And
Thomas B
Request the honor of your presence
As they are joined in marriage
Friday,the sixteenth of October
Two Thousand And Nine
At Three O'Clock in the afternoon
St.Margarets Church
Middle Village,New York


hows my wording?i know its not even but this is just my typing...do i need to put reception to follow at the end of the invitation?

i am doing a reception card..thats why im not sure if i need to put it on theinite..imso bad at these invites..they r giving mye grey hair

Aww I absolutely love the first three lines!! So romantic!!!!

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Posted by gina409

i am doing a reception card..thats why im not sure if i need to put it on theinite..imso bad at these invites..they r giving mye grey hair

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If you're doing a reception card, then you do not put the reception info on the invite.

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Posted by meg922

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Posted by gina409

i am doing a reception card..thats why im not sure if i need to put it on theinite..imso bad at these invites..they r giving mye grey hair

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If you're doing a reception card, then you do not put the reception info on the invite.

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thank you soooo much

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Posted by GRod2Be

Everything looks fine and you should put reception to follow at the bottom.

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yup, I agree

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Posted by gina409

here it i girls,well the worrding at least lol
(dont mind the spacingand the making things in capital lol..i have to fix it)

Once in a while,
Right in the middle of an ordinary life,
Love gives us a fairytale.....
Together with their families
Gina L
And
Thomas B
Request the honor of your presence
As they are joined in marriage
Friday,the sixteenth of October
Two Thousand And Nine
At Three O'Clock in the afternoon
St.Margarets Church
Middle Village,New York


hows my wording?i know its not even but this is just my typing...do i need to put reception to follow at the end of the invitation?

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Once in a while,
Right in the middle of an ordinary life,
Love gives us (AT FIRST THOUGHT IT WOULD LOOK BETTER AS 'YOU' BUT THATS MORE OF A PERSONAL DECISION)a fairytale.....
Together with their families
Gina
And (MAY NOT BE CAPITALIZED, IM NOT SURE)
Thomas B
Request the honor of your presence
As they are joined in marriage
Friday,the sixteenth of October
Two Thousand And Nine
At Three O'Clock (BELIEVE IT SHOULD BE LITTLE C IN CLOCK)in the afternoon
St. Margarets ('S?) Church
Middle Village, New York

Everything else looks good

Gina I really like the way you worded it.

Awww I love the first three lines!

Very nice!!

My FH is a Thomas B too

this is going to sound RIDICULOUS but i have read that if you are having a ceremony at a church, HONOR is spelled HONOUR. isn't that crazy? and who would even notice that??

Wording crap

Gina I think its perfect

I am also having a reception card so I did NOT put Reception to follow on the invitation. I only put the church on the invitation. HTH!

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Posted by pandafish519

this is going to sound RIDICULOUS but i have read that if you are having a ceremony at a church, HONOR is spelled HONOUR. isn't that crazy? and who would even notice that??

Wording crap

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I was just going to say that. It should be honour.

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Posted by gina409

here it i girls,well the worrding at least lol
(dont mind the spacingand the making things in capital lol..i have to fix it)

Once in a while,
Right in the middle of an ordinary life,
Love gives us a fairytale.....
Together with their families
Gina L
And
Thomas B
Request the honor of your presence
As they are joined in marriage
Friday,the sixteenth of October
Two Thousand And Nine
At Three O'Clock in the afternoon
St.Margarets Church
Middle Village,New York


hows my wording?i know its not even but this is just my typing...do i need to put reception to follow at the end of the invitation?

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Did you put a space after the commas after Friday and Middle Village? I can't tell with this font but there should be one space after a comma.

pretty sure margarets needs to have an apostrophe 's'
Margaret's....
sorry I am an English teacher...check their website or letterhead to be 100%

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Posted by BarbieGrl10

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Posted by pandafish519

this is going to sound RIDICULOUS but i have read that if you are having a ceremony at a church, HONOR is spelled HONOUR. isn't that crazy? and who would even notice that??

Wording crap

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I was just going to say that. It should be honour.

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We spelled it honour on our invites too...I never heard about the church thing though, I always thought it was the just the more formal way.