Looks good to me!!! You are soo close! And is Greg the only boy in the family? Poor guy!!!
RadiantBride
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I think it reads great. I am not the best in grammer but when you have to our parents should it be To our parents- xyz, xyz. The same with your siblings that was the only thing that I caught.
I love the memory poem at the bottom.
Kimbalina
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Posted by RadiantBride
I think it reads great. I am not the best in grammer but when you have to our parents should it be To our parents- xyz, xyz. The same with your siblings that was the only thing that I caught.
I love the memory poem at the bottom.
Thats a great idea!
Thank you!
bluekat16
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I think it looks good. I really didn't see anything that looked or read badly.
I'm using the same memory poem in my program.
Kimbalina
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Posted by jeffamanda080808
Looks good to me!!! You are soo close! And is Greg the only boy in the family? Poor guy!!!
Yea he is the oldest and has 2 younger sisters and so am I.