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Kimbalina Posted:

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Thank you for looking! All set!

jeffamanda080808 Posted:

Re: Proof Read my program welcoming?

Looks good to me!!! You are soo close!
And is Greg the only boy in the family? Poor guy!!!
RadiantBride Posted:

Re: Proof Read my program welcoming?

I think it reads great.
I am not the best in grammer but when you have to our parents should it be
To our parents- xyz, xyz. The same with your siblings that was the only thing that I caught.

I love the memory poem at the bottom.
Kimbalina Posted:

Re: Proof Read my program welcoming?


Posted by RadiantBride

I think it reads great.
I am not the best in grammer but when you have to our parents should it be
To our parents- xyz, xyz. The same with your siblings that was the only thing that I caught.

I love the memory poem at the bottom.



Thats a great idea!

Thank you!
bluekat16 Posted:

Re: Proof Read my program welcoming?

I think it looks good. I really didn't see anything that looked or read badly.

I'm using the same memory poem in my program.
Kimbalina Posted:

Re: Proof Read my program welcoming?


Posted by jeffamanda080808

Looks good to me!!! You are soo close!
And is Greg the only boy in the family? Poor guy!!!



Yea he is the oldest and has 2 younger sisters and so am I.

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