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You know what we need????

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an 06 poem!

Who wants to give it a try?
SweetCin704

Re: You know what we need????

Great job!
MayBride06

Re: You know what we need????

Rock on!!!!! Maybe I will think of one....
Jen2999

Re: You know what we need????

An 06 sonnet.... NO JOKES people...

We were newly engaged and excited
as we quickly typed each new wedding post
Surprised, we saw how simply delighted
strangers were over a good best man's toast

Fast friends we all became with each new plan
Ooh's an Ahh's came when each bride found a dress
And we discussed how to get a great tan
while we pondered over groomsmen's vests

Menus, cakes, invites, and bridal showers
Came as we realized it was almost time
We made final decisions on flowers
And tried very hard to save each last dime

Even though our year has come to an end
Now we have frienships that won't ever bend




MayBride06

Re: You know what we need????


Posted by Jen2999

An 06 sonnet.... NO JOKES people...

We were newly engaged and excited
as we quickly typed each new wedding post
Surprised, we saw how simply delighted
strangers were over a good best man's toast

Fast friends we all became with each new plan
Ooh's an Ahh's came when each bride found a dress
And we discussed how to get a great tan
while we pondered over groomsmen's vests

Menus, cakes, invites, and bridal showers
Came as we realized it was almost time
We made final decisions on flowers
And tried very hard to save each last dime

Even though our year has come to an end
Now we have frienships that won't ever bend





BRod-Cheng

Re: You know what we need????

Excellent jobs on the sonnet and poem.
MrsStefan

Re: You know what we need????


Posted by SummerBride06

here's my attempt at a poem. please don't laugh too hard


We Are The Brides of 2006

We all came to LIW to prepare,
For a wedding and special memories to share,
With friends both old and new,
So many of us didn't have a clue,
Of how to find the right dress,
And learn how to spend so much less.

We planned get togethers at Fridays,
And learned we were similar in so many ways,
Whether a wedding in summer, winter, spring or
fall,
We knew we were brides who had to have it all.
A chocolate fountain here, an ice sculpture there,
We had 4 different trials to perfect our wedding
day hair.

We've gone to each other's weddings and just
when our DH's couldn't take anymore,
Another LIW wedding invitation would show up at
the door.
And just when 2006 finally came to an end,
The Wedding of the Year 2007 meant, as poor
DH would comprehend,
To pull out the suit once more,
And party on with our rockin' 06ers on the dance
floor.

Now 2007 is coming to an end,
And we realize that it's now time to spend,
Our time more wisely on LIFamilies,
Even though DH's are still begging us PLEASE,
Put an end to the online chatroom,
And come spend more time in our bedroom!

But, alas, we ARE the brides of 2006,
And although our board is about to close,
Our memories and time spent together are
things that everyone knows,
Will bond us as sisters for life.

We thank you Ron, Liz and Kim for all of the fun
we had,
Especially now as many are no longer bride and
groom but mom and dad,
Please don't forget us for we are, and always will
be, the brides of 2006.



THAT IS AWESOME!!!!!
Goldi1021

Re: You know what we need????

Im working on mine despite numerous attempts to learn criteria
mskittynj

Re: You know what we need????

That poem was AMAZING summer bride!!!!!
XOXOXO
Kitty
ewickens

Re: You know what we need????

I love them both, Carol and Jen!!!!!!!
DCSAAB06

Re: You know what we need????

OMG, that poem was awesome and crap...its so sad at the same time. Bought a tear to my eye.
autumn

Re: You know what we need????


Posted by SummerBride06

here's my attempt at a poem. please don't laugh too hard


We Are The Brides of 2006

We all came to LIW to prepare,
For a wedding and special memories to share,
With friends both old and new,
So many of us didn't have a clue,
Of how to find the right dress,
And learn how to spend so much less.

We planned get togethers at Fridays,
And learned we were similar in so many ways,
Whether a wedding in summer, winter, spring or
fall,
We knew we were brides who had to have it all.
A chocolate fountain here, an ice sculpture there,
We had 4 different trials to perfect our wedding
day hair.

We've gone to each other's weddings and just
when our DH's couldn't take anymore,
Another LIW wedding invitation would show up at
the door.
And just when 2006 finally came to an end,
The Wedding of the Year 2007 meant, as poor
DH would comprehend,
To pull out the suit once more,
And party on with our rockin' 06ers on the dance
floor.

Now 2007 is coming to an end,
And we realize that it's now time to spend,
Our time more wisely on LIFamilies,
Even though DH's are still begging us PLEASE,
Put an end to the online chatroom,
And come spend more time in our bedroom!

But, alas, we ARE the brides of 2006,
And although our board is about to close,
Our memories and time spent together are
things that everyone knows,
Will bond us as sisters for life.

We thank you Ron, Liz and Kim for all of the fun
we had,
Especially now as many are no longer bride and
groom but mom and dad,
Please don't forget us for we are, and always will
be, the brides of 2006.





That was soooooooooooo nice.
Brian and Marie

Re: You know what we need????

GREAT JOB GIRLS!!
beautyq115

Re: You know what we need????

Love the poem Carol
Dee606

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summer bride & jen, that was amazing!!! I am tearing up
Goldi1021

Re: You know what we need????

My poem is about done. If you promise you won't have me committed, I may post it.

evnme

Re: You know what we need????


Posted by Goldi1021

My poem is about done. If you promise you won't have me committed, I may post it.



i promise!!!!
Goldi1021

Re: You know what we need????

Well you are a woman of G-d so I wouldn't expect you to lie. It is the others I worry about!

evnme

Re: You know what we need????


Posted by Goldi1021

Well you are a woman of G-d so I wouldn't expect you to lie. It is the others I worry about!



ewickens

Re: You know what we need????


Posted by Goldi1021

My poem is about done. If you promise you won't have me committed, I may post it.



Post it woman!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kerrycec

Re: You know what we need????

these are great!! I may try one soon..

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