Jewish Wording -spin-off

I have posted in the past that FH aunt said the word *united* is very non-jewish and asked me to change the wording.

United was used twice in my invite and my invite ask if there was another word I would like to use instead of having *joined* twice.

Please help

Wording as of now:

Two lives, Two Hearts
Joined together in friendship
UNITED forever in love
(top corner)

Together with their parents inviite you to share in a celebration of love as they are UNITED in marriage.
(middle part)

Pic in my ablums if you need to see the whole thing

TIA Ladies

Re: Jewish Wording -spin-off

Together with their parents inviite you to share in a celebration of love as they EXCHANGE MARRIAGE VOWS.

Together with their parents inviite you to share in a celebration of love as they are JOINED in marriage

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Posted by adelya21

Together with their parents inviite you to share in a celebration of love as they EXCHANGE MARRIAGE VOWS.

Together with their parents inviite you to share in a celebration of love as they are JOINED in marriage

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The only problem with this is that in the very traditional jewish ceremony, the couple does not EXCHANGE vows, it's an acquisition.

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Posted by HSsweethearts

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Posted by adelya21

Together with their parents invite you to share in a celebration of love as they EXCHANGE MARRIAGE VOWS.

Together with their parents inviite you to share in a celebration of love as they are JOINED in marriage

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The only problem with this is that in the very traditional Jewish ceremony, the couple does not EXCHANGE vows, it's an acquisition.

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This

I just need a really good thesaurus LOL

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BEFORE ASKING FOR SUGGESTIONS, DO YOU AND FH LIKE THE WORDING AS IS?

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The wording is fine but I don't want to be frown on


that a BIG NO- NO with FILs LOL

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really im jewish and went to jewish school all my life and never heard of that lol well then I propose the latter lol

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Posted by Kuklitsa143

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Posted by HSsweethearts

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Posted by adelya21

Together with their parents invite you to share in a celebration of love as they EXCHANGE MARRIAGE VOWS.

Together with their parents inviite you to share in a celebration of love as they are JOINED in marriage

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The only problem with this is that in the very traditional Jewish ceremony, the couple does not EXCHANGE vows, it's an acquisition.

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This

I just need a really good thesaurus LOL

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Re: Jewish Wording -spin-off

SO WHY STRESS OVER IT....ITS JUST 4 WORDS ON A PIECE OF PAPER...AND SADLY, FOR MOST PEOPLE, THE INVITES JUST END UP IN THE GARBAGE...I DONT THINK ANYONE WILL HARP ON JOIN VERSUS UNITED VERSUS ANYTHING ELSE YOU WIND UP PUTTING IN THERE.....DID YOU ASK THE FIL HER SUGGESTION AS TO THE WORDING?

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ehh if its religiously frowned upon and she has many religious people attending they will. Plus if the in laws won't like it I wouldnt do it lol.

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Posted by BENETTA2012

SO WHY STRESS OVER IT....ITS JUST 4 WORDS ON A PIECE OF PAPER...AND SADLY, FOR MOST PEOPLE, THE INVITES JUST END UP IN THE GARBAGE...I DONT THINK ANYONE WILL HARP ON JOIN VERSUS UNITED VERSUS ANYTHING ELSE YOU WIND UP PUTTING IN THERE.....DID YOU ASK THE FIL HER SUGGESTION AS TO THE WORDING?

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Posted by adelya21

ehh if its religiously frowned upon and she has many religious people attending they will. Plus if the in laws won't like it I wouldnt do it lol.

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Posted by BENETTA2012

SO WHY STRESS OVER IT....ITS JUST 4 WORDS ON A PIECE OF PAPER...AND SADLY, FOR MOST PEOPLE, THE INVITES JUST END UP IN THE GARBAGE...I DONT THINK ANYONE WILL HARP ON JOIN VERSUS UNITED VERSUS ANYTHING ELSE YOU WIND UP PUTTING IN THERE.....DID YOU ASK THE FIL HER SUGGESTION AS TO THE WORDING?

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this!!!!!!

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i know this probably wont help you lol but just in case this is what we used


The harmony of Love meets with the melody of Life to create our Beautiful Love Song…

Mr. Ramiz Mamedov & Mrs. Khanna Mamedova
cordially invite you to the marriage of their daughter

Adelya
to
Gerard Christopher Peyer

son of Mr. Gerard Peyer & Mrs. Lisa A. Peyer


Sunday, the fifth of June
Two thousand and eleven
at half past five o’clock in the evening
Woodbury Country Club
884 Jericho Turnpike
Woodbury, NY

Reception to follow
Black Tie Attire Preferred

Re: Jewish Wording -spin-off

Thanks so much for your input and your invite sound so romantic and sweet - Congrats

I can't put names for other reason (long story) I will just ask the Aunt who giving the issues to come up with the wording LOL

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I THINK ULTIMATELY WHATEVER YOU CHOOSE WILL BE PERFECT!!!....THE MOST IMPORTANT THING IS ALWAYS HAVING THE SUPPORT OF FH IN EVERY DECISION, WEDDING RELATED OR NOT!...I THINK IF YOU BOTH ARE IN AGREEMENT WITH THE FINAL WORDING, THE INVITATIONS WILL BE FINE WITH EVERYONE ELSE...AFTER ALL, AS CHEESY AS IT SOUNDS, YOUR WEDDING IS REALLY ABOUT YOU AND FH JOINING LIVES TOGETHER AND TAKING VOWS, NOT WORDING ON INVITES OR CENTERPEICES OR ANY OF THE OTHER 'STUFF' :)

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ye make them do the work! lol

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Posted by Kuklitsa143

Thanks so much for your input and your invite sound so romantic and sweet - Congrats

I can't put names for other reason (long story) I will just ask the Aunt who giving the issues to come up with the wording LOL

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I personally like your wording and think if they arent happy with it they should come up with something else!
But how about this:

Two lives, Two Hearts
Joined together in friendship
Bonded (or'Connected') forever in love


Together with their parents invite you to share in a celebration of love as they wed (or just 'as they get married)