Proof my wedding invitation! Updated with all corrections!

For some reason it looks like I wrote 2:30 wrong. Please offer suggestions.

Thanks



Updated with all corrections -

I would do:
half past two

and change 'invites' to 'invite', and you're golden.

very pretty invite

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Posted by Shorty McBride

I would do:
half past two

and change 'invites' to 'invite', and you're golden.

very pretty invite

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Awesome idea! Thanks

If your reception is at Chateau Briand, there's no reason to mention anything about the reception on the invitation ...

That info should go on the reception card.

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Posted by PreshusSmurf

If your reception is at Chateau Briand, there's no reason to mention anything about the reception on the invitation ...

That info should go on the reception card.

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Makes sense!

Thanks

I was just reading it over again, and I realized I know EXACTLY where your church is! I grew up in Canarsie ...

I love it!!!!! THat is sooooo nice.
Just make sure to take off the 's' on the word invite. It should be 'invite' not 'invites'
I love this invitation!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Its the only one that makes me question my own.
I love it!

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Posted by Shorty McBride

I would do:
half past two

and change 'invites' to 'invite', and you're golden.

very pretty invite

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I totally agree

Enjft its beautiful...the other ladies pretty much covered the one suggestion i had...i love it..your close to me i might just crash your ceremony

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Posted by charisma

Enjft its beautiful...the other ladies pretty much covered the one suggestion i had...i love it..your close to me i might just crash your ceremony

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all is welcome

came out beautiful!!! I love the red!!!!

the only other possible change I could suggest is to delete we, and instead reorder the sentence...

Together with our parents,
name
and
name
invite......


very pretty.... but then I'm quite partial to red and white

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Posted by Shorty McBride

I would do:
half past two

and change 'invites' to 'invite', and you're golden.

very pretty invite

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Yep. That would be the only two changes I would make. Very pretty invite..Im loving the red.

agree

I work at PS 115... I pass that church all the time

i think there are too many Canarsie girls on this board. it's really pretty eliana!

The design is stunning. I agree with all the suggestions above....and I would like to see the monogram on top squeezed in a little tighter.

The only other suggestion is that I'd like to see a fancier font for the text. It's such a gorgeous font used for your names...and I think the other font dulls it down a little. Maybe even putting the other text in small caps?

p.s. i got your GORGEOUS STD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love the design on the side.

Looks good....gramatically, its all been mentioned above...I just think with such a fancy card..you should make your font a bit fancier...possibly a fancier script or what not.

But its still very elegant!

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Posted by Shorty McBride

I would do:
half past two

and change 'invites' to 'invite', and you're golden.

very pretty invite

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I have to agree with this Eee. Then it'll be perfect. I can't wait to get it