another invite question

sorry i just have tons of questions.. i swear after today im done!!


The wording i like just doesnt fit.. so now i need to come up with something else

any one bored and want to help out?

this was the original

Bride
and
Groom
together with their parents
Brides parents name
and
Grooms Parents name
invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
on day
year
at time
location
address
city and state


So i removed the line 'and begin their new life togheter' the address ,city and state lines
and its still one line too long. but i feel like if you take anything else out it ruins the wording.

So i picked out something else and noone else seems to like it

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Posted by Soon2BMrsD

sorry i just have tons of questions.. i swear after today im done!!


The wording i like just doesnt fit.. so now i need to come up with something else

any one bored and want to help out?

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Can you change the spacing or the font size to make it fit?

i tried to put the date and year on the same line.. not enough room

i think i found wording thats better (well i seem to think it is) and i think FILs and my parents wont like it



What do you girls think??

Because you have shared in their lives
by your friendship and love
Megan Rose
And
Nicholas Andrew
Together with their parents
Invite you to share in the joy
When they exchange their marriage vows
Friday, the thirteenth of June
Two thousand and eight
at three o'clock in the afternoon
St. Joseph’s Church in Babylon

see both parents are helping pay.. so i am concerned that they will be upset that their names are not listed

which is why i was originally going with the first verse

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Posted by mathteach

I like the new one even better!

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i like it better also.

BRIDE’S PARENTS
and
GROOM’S PARENTS
invite you to share in the joy of
the marriage uniting their children
BRIDE’S NAME
and
GROOM’S NAME
This celebration of love will be
on DAY, the DATE of MONTH
YEAR
at TIME in the TIME OF DAY
LOCATION
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE

would this work

Or honestly, would the parents mind if their names were not on them? Maybe since both parents names are not on it then no one would feel slighted??

Know what I mean?

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Posted by mathteach

Or honestly, would the parents mind if their names were not on them? Maybe since both parents names are not on it then no one would feel slighted??

Know what I mean?

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thats what im thinking

see both parents are helping.. Fhs more so then mine.. but were paying for a large chunck so im trying to make it as fair as possible ya know?

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Posted by mathteach

BRIDE’S PARENTS
and
GROOM’S PARENTS
invite you to share in the joy of
the marriage uniting their children
BRIDE’S NAME
and
GROOM’S NAME
This celebration of love will be
on DAY, the DATE of MONTH
YEAR
at TIME in the TIME OF DAY
LOCATION
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE

would this work

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i was thinking something like that but then it saying that were not helping ya know

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Posted by Soon2BMrsD

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Posted by mathteach

BRIDE’S PARENTS
and
GROOM’S PARENTS
invite you to share in the joy of
the marriage uniting their children
BRIDE’S NAME
and
GROOM’S NAME
This celebration of love will be
on DAY, the DATE of MONTH
YEAR
at TIME in the TIME OF DAY
LOCATION
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE

would this work

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i was thinking something like that but then it saying that were not helping ya know

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True...

and i thought this would be the easy part...WHAT WAS I THINKING?

megan
take out the address
just have the name of RH and the town

i think your right christine!

thanks so much for all your help!