another invite question

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Posted by Soon2BMrsD

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Posted by mathteach

BRIDE’S PARENTS
and
GROOM’S PARENTS
invite you to share in the joy of
the marriage uniting their children
BRIDE’S NAME
and
GROOM’S NAME
This celebration of love will be
on DAY, the DATE of MONTH
YEAR
at TIME in the TIME OF DAY
LOCATION
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE

would this work

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i was thinking something like that but then it saying that were not helping ya know

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I really like this version if it would fit- it acknowledges the parents still

FH's parents and my aunt were helping out with paying for stuff and I (after discussing it with them) did the following -just to give you an idea:

Danielle ____________
&
Gary ___________
together with their families
invite you to share in the joy
of their marriage
on the ninth day of March two thousand and eight
eleven thirty in the morning

Russo's on the Bay
Howard Beach, New York

Reception Immediately Following the Ceremony

I told them that if I put all the names and stuff it would take up too many lines and it wouldn't work- after they saw the invitations they all were pleased with how the wording came out.

yes, no address
just RH and town

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Posted by DGoldfarb0776

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Posted by Soon2BMrsD

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Posted by mathteach

BRIDE’S PARENTS
and
GROOM’S PARENTS
invite you to share in the joy of
the marriage uniting their children
BRIDE’S NAME
and
GROOM’S NAME
This celebration of love will be
on DAY, the DATE of MONTH
YEAR
at TIME in the TIME OF DAY
LOCATION
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE

would this work

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i was thinking something like that but then it saying that were not helping ya know

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I really like this version if it would fit- it acknowledges the parents still

FH's parents and my aunt were helping out with paying for stuff and I (after discussing it with them) did the following -just to give you an idea:

Danielle ____________
&
Gary ___________
together with their families
invite you to share in the joy
of their marriage
on the ninth day of March two thousand and eight
eleven thirty in the morning

Russo's on the Bay
Howard Beach, New York

Reception Immediately Following the Ceremony

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i like that too!

thanks for posting!

and laura i tried its still too long if i do that

thats weird if its only one line too long

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Posted by alissa5517

Show both sets of parents both of the wordings that you picked and let them know why you would be picking the one without their names. They might just be OK with it.

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i think your right.. i think im more worried about it then they are.. im just extremely grateful to them for helping and i want them to get the recognition they deserve

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Posted by Snowflake08

thats weird if its only one line too long

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the company only alots for 12 lines.. and the original verse is 16 lines so i had to shorten it.. but it just didnt sound right cutting out all the wording

ok so if i go with this wording

Because you have shared in their lives
by your friendship and love
Megan Rose
And
Nicholas Andrew
Together with their parents
Invite you to share in the joy
When they exchange their marriage vows
Friday, the thirteenth of June
Two thousand and eight
at three o'clock in the afternoon
St. Joseph’s Church in Babylon


should the second line say.. by or through?

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Posted by Soon2BMrsD

ok so if i go with this wording

Because you have shared in their lives
by your friendship and love
Megan Rose
And
Nicholas Andrew
Together with their parents
Invite you to share in the joy
When they exchange their marriage vows
Friday, the thirteenth of June
Two thousand and eight
at three o'clock in the afternoon
St. Joseph’s Church in Babylon


should the second line say.. by or through?

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how about 'with'???

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Posted by mathteach

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Posted by Soon2BMrsD

ok so if i go with this wording

Because you have shared in their lives
by your friendship and love
Megan Rose
And
Nicholas Andrew
Together with their parents
Invite you to share in the joy
When they exchange their marriage vows
Friday, the thirteenth of June
Two thousand and eight
at three o'clock in the afternoon
St. Joseph’s Church in Babylon


should the second line say.. by or through?

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how about 'with'???

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i like that! thanks!