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Can someone proofread this for me?

divabride Posted:

Can someone proofread this for me?

Sorry, had to edit. It seems people steal thank you's and pass it as their own.
Jan05Bride Posted:

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HELLO
divabride Posted:

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Good eye!!! Thank you so much!!

Jan05Bride Posted:

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HI DIVA
divabride Posted:

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Posted by Jan05Bride

I might also consider taking out 'each and every one of you' and just say 'thank everyone'



Done!
Anything else you can see? I really appreciate it!
Jan05Bride Posted:

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no, it's really perfect. Made me a little emotional just reading it. Very heartfelt.


KimberlyBride Posted:

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I think the second sentence is a little wordy. Otherwise I love it!

divabride Posted:

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Posted by KimberlyBride

I think the second sentence is a little wordy. Otherwise I love it!



I was worried about that. Any suggestions?
hbradio Posted:

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I love it Diva!

divabride Posted:

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Posted by Jan05Bride


no, it's really perfect. Made me a little emotional just reading it. Very heartfelt.





Awww, thanks!
AJsMommy122 Posted:

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what happened
diamondgrlie Posted:

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Posted by divabride

Sorry, had to edit. It seems people steal thank you's and pass it as their own.




I missed it!
ckgmwedding Posted:

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I am already married(no stealing here- ) so you can FM me if you want and I will help!
103005FallBride Posted:

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February05 Posted:

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Posted by divabride

Sorry, had to edit. It seems people steal thank you's and pass it as their own.



that stinks... from the other responses, it sounds like it was really beautiful

But i thought that was the whole point of LIW anyway- to get ideas for all those details that make it special. Like i doubt every person is going to tell all their guests that they got the idea of the slipper basket from Maxine or the cry packs, petal cones, etc.... It just stinks to have to hold back b/c of things like that. Then again, maybe i'm biased b/c i got my Thank you to friends and family from Ang... though for that, i had expressed written consent in the form of an instant message So maybe you could just put a disclaimer at the bottom of it?

either way, you ARE wonder woman, so i'm Positive that it was Beautifully written!
AJsMommy122 Posted:

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Posted by neeniebean86


Posted by divabride

Sorry, had to edit. It seems people steal thank you's and pass it as their own.



that stinks... from the other responses, it sounds like it was really beautiful

But i thought that was the whole point of LIW anyway- to get ideas for all those details that make it special. Like i doubt every person is going to tell all their guests that they got the idea of the slipper basket from Maxine or the cry packs, petal cones, etc.... It just stinks to have to hold back b/c of things like that. Then again, maybe i'm biased b/c i got my Thank you to friends and family from Ang... though for that, i had expressed written consent in the form of an instant message So maybe you could just put a disclaimer at the bottom of it?

either way, you ARE wonder woman, so i'm Positive that it was Beautifully written!




WHAT?!?!?!!??!!? You mean everyone is NOT telling their guests that the slipper basket idea was mine?!!?!?


slwh2005 Posted:

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I'm sorry I missed (not so that I could steal it though)

It sounds like it was very nice.
divabride Posted:

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Posted by neeniebean86

But i thought that was the whole point of LIW anyway- to get ideas for all those details that make it special.



I totally agree, I love to share and see ideas with you ladies. But after I posted here I seached for thank you's on LIW and saw a thank you written by a fellow LIW bride. I did the same search on the knot, and found that the same thank you was being used word for word by other brides. That's when I came back on here and edited it because I wanted to keep my heartfelt thank you to my guests personal. I hope you understand. I just want to keep it special
SomethingBlu Posted:

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Posted by divabride
But after I posted here I seached for thank you's on LIW and saw a thank you written by a fellow LIW bride. I did the same search on the knot, and found that the same thank you was being used word for word by other brides. That's when I came back on here and edited it because I wanted to keep my heartfelt thank you to my guests personal.



WHAT? That fast...something got taken and re-posted that quickly? That's just suck y!

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