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I'm looking for the proper wording for our reception cards. This is what we have so far- The pleasure of your company is requested at the reception following the ceremony Carlyle on the Green Home of the 2002 US Open Bethpage State Park Long Island, New York 7:00 cocktails The question is, do we need anything else? Is the wording correct? Thank you for your feedback.

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I think your wording is fine. Good luck!

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Why include Home of 2002 US Open? I think that Carlyle is a nice enough place to stand on its own reputation. Just my opinion, but it might seem out of place to mention it.

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If you and your FH are huge golf fans, then I can see you mentioning the Open but if not, no reason to include it.

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it was my fiance's idea...I have to say yes to some of his ideas, even if I don't agree. Thanks :)

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I'm I dunno.. but should it maybe say HOST and not home.. because it isnt where the open usually occurs and also I live in Bethpage and most of the places saying host. My families vacations at Kiawah Island, SC which was the Host to the Ryder Cup a few years back. For example Flushing meadows is the home of the US OPEN tennis wise.. But UTAH was the host to the Olympics. I think it is silly to put on the response cards kinda but if he likes it that way, then do it! We put.. Imperial Manor Bethpage, NY Cocktails 4:30PM Dinner and Dancing 5:30pm ( we would have to pay additional for a fifth line with our invite company!!) Laurie

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.... at the reception following the ceremony .... .... .... 7:00 cocktails Is the ceremony ending at 7:00? You really do not need both. The US Open bit is a whole other issue. But I understand your point about your FI's request.

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your feedback w/ my fiance, you all have great points. Thanks! Contiued success to all...