Help me correct and group sentences for my wedding invite
subramanian
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Help me correct and group sentences for my wedding invite
Saranya & Subramanian invites….
Born unknown to each other we are beginning to unite together for a better and sweeter life.
Nothing would give immense pleasure than to have you with us
When the celestial bodies are in perfect constellation
And the nuptial knots are tied, And the Vedic verbal proclaims……..
Please make your valuable presence to bless us
When your calendar Shows 4th SEP 2008, Thursday and Your clock strikes between 9am to 10:30am
At SKM Mahal , Devakottai
Maria31
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This is very deep... did you write it yourself??
jgl
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i think it is very different and I applaud you for your creativity and uniqueness .... although you didnt ask for an opinion i just want to say that people may have a hard time following it and understanding it.. i'm sort of lost with it myself
PreshusSmurf
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Posted by jgl
i think it is very different and I applaud you for your creativity and uniqueness .... although you didnt ask for an opinion i just want to say that people may have a hard time following it and understanding it.. i'm sort of lost with it myself
i have to agree with jgl on this ...
i would suggest only using part of what you have posted above. Maybe just the first sentence? And then use a more standardized format for the date, time, location, etc. i think you are going to have trouble finding a way to fit this on an invitation the way it is ...
also wanted to point out that most invitations include the first and last names of the bride and groom (or the first and middle names of the bride and groom, when the names of their parents)
Annoulak
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it seems to me that it just needs to be 'cleaned up' a bit...how about this...
Please grace us with your presence to bless Saranya & Subramanian
We were born unknown to each other, but we will be uniting for a better and sweeter life together.
Nothing would give us more pleasure than to have you with us when the celestial bodies are in perfect allignment, the nuptial knots are tied, and the Vedic poems are proclaimed.
Thursday, the fourth of September Two thousand and eight at nine o'clock in the morning
