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Hey i need some opinions on my favors w/poll

charisma Posted:

Hey i need some opinions on my favors w/poll

I am doing edible chocolate...this is the proof i was sent, what do you think any suggestions....
#1- is another sample of her work for comparrison
shopaholic07 Posted:

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JMO but I think it's a little too busy......I think if you got rid of the monogram it will be just fine.

enjft Posted:

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Honestly I do think the lettering is a little overwhelming.

enjft Posted:

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Posted by shopaholic07

JMO but I think it's a little too busy......I think if you got rid of the monogram it will be just fine.



or making the font smaller on the thank you section.
BrideToBe24 Posted:

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I think it would look great if the monogram was taken out...JMO

Love the idea though!
charisma Posted:

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Posted by enjft


Posted by shopaholic07

JMO but I think it's a little too busy......I think if you got rid of the monogram it will be just fine.



or making the font smaller on the thank you section.

see i'm thinking the same thing...i think it's way to busy, my daughter loves it
chellynyc Posted:

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Font is a little too confusing, maybe get rid of your first intitials and leave the last name initial but a little lighther color font.

monelwookie Posted:

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Posted by charisma


Posted by enjft


Posted by shopaholic07

JMO but I think it's a little too busy......I think if you got rid of the monogram it will be just fine.



or making the font smaller on the thank you section.

see i'm thinking the same thing...i think it's way to busy, my daughter loves it




i think you should take out the J and D, and fade out the M a bit (make it a bit softer) so that the writing over it is more promonant....

HTH
Shorty McBride Posted:

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Its pretty- love the colors...I would either get rid of the monogram, or make it really small in the corner of the photo...which is gorgeous, BTW.

But grammatically correct, it would say
Love,
The Morrises

By writing 'The Morris' ', you're implying ownership. The Morris' ______ what? The Morris' cat? The Morris' wedding? Follow me?
PegaLega Posted:

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I agree its a little busy...maybe make all the lettering smaller if you want to keep the monogram...if not I would say get rid of the monogram

RGV07 Posted:

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make the mono0gram a little smaller.

MrsQ-in2007 Posted:

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Janelle, are these from the ebay vendor? Same one that chrissynricky used? B/c my girls told me they wanted to use this vendor for my shower favors but they were out of business this month due to something like a lawsuit b/c of their name or something. I just want to make sure you don't have an issue.

As for the design itself, I agree that with the monogram as is, it's a bit much. What I'd do is to mimic the design of the other example... so basically remove the first name initials from the monogram, make the M larger and more washed out so it's like a background. It would be perfect then... oh yeah, and as suggested, it should say the Morrises, not the apostrophe.

charisma Posted:

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Yes it is a ebay vendor..emmaedibles...i'm not sure but i have no complaints so far...and i it stays that way...
gpurple Posted:

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Great idea for a favor!@!!!
very Cute!!!!!

Let us know what you decide!
; )
KellyS15 Posted:

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I think that either the mongram needs to be in its own space or not on it at all. It is hard to read the rest of the wrapper.

SAMORY Posted:

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I think it is really nice. It's not to much going on.

JennysMOH Posted:

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Great favor idea. I would go with the style of the sample. The way she did yours it makes it a little difficult to read.

soon2BMrsDee Posted:

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Posted by charisma


Posted by enjft


Posted by shopaholic07

JMO but I think it's a little too busy......I think if you got rid of the monogram it will be just fine.



or making the font smaller on the thank you section.

see i'm thinking the same thing...i think it's way to busy, my daughter loves it



remove the monogramming and it'll be perfect!
sweetdreamz1181 Posted:

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i agree without the monogram it will be perfect

SN2BMRSBURTE Posted:

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I think you should take out the J and D, and fade out the M a bit (make it a bit softer) so that the writing over it is more promonant....

HTH


I agree!

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