JMO but I think it's a little too busy......I think if you got rid of the monogram it will be just fine.
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Honestly I do think the lettering is a little overwhelming.
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JMO but I think it's a little too busy......I think if you got rid of the monogram it will be just fine.
or making the font smaller on the thank you section.
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I think it would look great if the monogram was taken out...JMO
Love the idea though!
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JMO but I think it's a little too busy......I think if you got rid of the monogram it will be just fine.
or making the font smaller on the thank you section.
see i'm thinking the same thing...i think it's way to busy, my daughter loves it
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Font is a little too confusing, maybe get rid of your first intitials and leave the last name initial but a little lighther color font.
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Posted by enjft
Posted by shopaholic07
JMO but I think it's a little too busy......I think if you got rid of the monogram it will be just fine.
or making the font smaller on the thank you section.
see i'm thinking the same thing...i think it's way to busy, my daughter loves it
i think you should take out the J and D, and fade out the M a bit (make it a bit softer) so that the writing over it is more promonant....
HTH
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Its pretty- love the colors...I would either get rid of the monogram, or make it really small in the corner of the photo...which is gorgeous, BTW.
But grammatically correct, it would say Love, The Morrises
By writing 'The Morris' ', you're implying ownership. The Morris' ______ what? The Morris' cat? The Morris' wedding? Follow me?
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I agree its a little busy...maybe make all the lettering smaller if you want to keep the monogram...if not I would say get rid of the monogram
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make the mono0gram a little smaller.
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Janelle, are these from the ebay vendor? Same one that chrissynricky used? B/c my girls told me they wanted to use this vendor for my shower favors but they were out of business this month due to something like a lawsuit b/c of their name or something. I just want to make sure you don't have an issue.
As for the design itself, I agree that with the monogram as is, it's a bit much. What I'd do is to mimic the design of the other example... so basically remove the first name initials from the monogram, make the M larger and more washed out so it's like a background. It would be perfect then... oh yeah, and as suggested, it should say the Morrises, not the apostrophe.
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Yes it is a ebay vendor..emmaedibles...i'm not sure but i have no complaints so far...and i it stays that way...
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Great idea for a favor!@!!! very Cute!!!!!
Let us know what you decide! ; )
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I think that either the mongram needs to be in its own space or not on it at all. It is hard to read the rest of the wrapper.
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I think it is really nice. It's not to much going on.
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Great favor idea. I would go with the style of the sample. The way she did yours it makes it a little difficult to read.
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Posted by charisma
Posted by enjft
Posted by shopaholic07
JMO but I think it's a little too busy......I think if you got rid of the monogram it will be just fine.
or making the font smaller on the thank you section.
see i'm thinking the same thing...i think it's way to busy, my daughter loves it
remove the monogramming and it'll be perfect!
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i agree without the monogram it will be perfect
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I think you should take out the J and D, and fade out the M a bit (make it a bit softer) so that the writing over it is more promonant....