Invitation wording

Here is the response card

The Favour of you reply
Is requested before
February 14th, 2010

We have reserved seats in you honour

M_________________________________________________

_____accepts with pleasure

_____declines with regret


Reception card

Reception
at six o’clock in the evening
Westbury Manor
1100 Jericho Turnpike
Westbury, NY

Invite

Together with their families

Rita P
and
Jason B

request the honour of your presence
at their marriage

Sunday, the twenty first of March
Two thousand ten
at three o’clock

St. Boniface Roman Catholic Church
631 Elmont Road
Elmont, NY

Does all of this sound ok

Also how is this timeline

Mail invites 1/7
RSVP 2/14
Wedding 3/21

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Posted by Lsorrent

Looks good to me! I would put your middle names if you both have one. I'm not putting FH's middle name on ours, but only because I don't have one and it would've looked weird.

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ok so even putting our last name we should still put our middle name?

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Posted by mzmahagony

change the words 'you' to 'your'

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LOL thanks that was just a typo

Sounds really good! I like the together with their parents part. (Are you guys paying for it?)

And as for Middle Names I am for it, unless your First & Middles name are like Forever long.

I think it all sounds good. I like middle names that's just my personal preference but it is not necesary.

oh and the timeline looks good too!!

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Posted by RitasEngaged

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Posted by Lsorrent

Looks good to me! I would put your middle names if you both have one. I'm not putting FH's middle name on ours, but only because I don't have one and it would've looked weird.

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ok so even putting our last name we should still put our middle name?

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I would, I think it's more formal that way......JMO

ok i will put the middle names Elizabeth and Salvatore

FH's last name is 11 letters long but when i typed it up it didn't look too long

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Posted by RitasEngaged

Here is the response card

The Favour of you reply
Is requested before
February 14th, 2010

We have reserved seats in you honour

M_________________________________________________

_____accepts with pleasure

_____declines with regret


Reception card

Reception
at six o’clock in the evening
Westbury Manor
1100 Jericho Turnpike
Westbury, NY

Invite

Together with their families

Rita P
and
Jason B

request the honour of your presence
at their marriage

Sunday, the twenty first of March
Two thousand ten
at three o’clock

St. Boniface Roman Catholic Church
631 Elmont Road
Elmont, NY

Does all of this sound ok

Also how is this timeline

Mail invites 1/7
RSVP 2/14
Wedding 3/21

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Fh goes to St. Boniface chruch

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Fh goes to St. Boniface chruch

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lol does he - neither of us do i just think it is so pretty

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Posted by RitasEngaged

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Fh goes to St. Boniface chruch

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lol does he - neither of us do i just think it is so pretty

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lol It is very pretty I went there once for Fh dads funeral, but my mother would be mad if we didnt use our chruch thats the only thing she wanted!

On the RSVP card, I would say 'on or before 02/00/10'

On the Reception card, a lot of people write 'Please join us for a reception honoring Joe & Ann at ........'

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Posted by stinenandy2010

On the RSVP card, I would say 'on or before 02/00/10'

On the Reception card, a lot of people write 'Please join us for a reception honoring Joe & Ann at ........'

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thanks