JB06 - you on today?

I have a question for you....

you're gonna hate this, it's an English question...

what punctuation goes in there? how do I make it not a run-on sentence?

'while all companies basically draw from the same labor pool and buy gidgets from the same manufacturers what sets us apart is our technologically advanced state-of-the-art operating system and seasoned management team featuring over 50 years of combined experience.'

it's for a brochure my company is doing...

Thanks JB!!!

While all companies basically draw from the same labor pool and buy gidgets from the same manufacturers, what sets us apart is our technologically advanced state-of-the-art operating system and seasoned management team, featuring over 50 years of combined experience.

If you want to break it up more:

All companies basically draw from the same labor pool and buy gidgets from the same manufacturers. What sets us apart is our technologically advanced state-of-the-art operating system and seasoned management team, featuring over 50 years of combined experience.

eta - too late

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Posted by JanuaryBride06

While all companies basically draw from the same labor pool and buy gidgets from the same manufacturers, what sets us apart is our technologically advanced state-of-the-art operating system and seasoned management team, featuring over 50 years of combined experience.

If you want to break it up more:

All companies basically draw from the same labor pool and buy gidgets from the same manufacturers. What sets us apart is our technologically advanced state-of-the-art operating system and seasoned management team, featuring over 50 years of combined experience.

eta - too late

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My bro needed it proofed - he was on a time crunch!! Thank you!!!!!