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JacnRob729 Posted:

need help changing this

Ok, i finally found a poem that I like.....but there is one verse that I dont like....its the second verse...the words dont rhyme?? Can anyone think of a way to change it? TIA

To My Parents As I Wed

Though you’ve given us your blessing, I think you’ll understand; Why I look at you so tenderly as I reach to take his hand.

A wedding is a joyful time as two young lives unite, Yet it’s time to think about the years that have gone by.

My memories are special gifts, their worth cannot be measured. The loving home you made for me my heart will always treasure.

And though I’m very happy as I make this brand new start. The love I feel for each of you is forever in my heart.
nylisa Posted:

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This is the poem I gave to my parents:

For my parents:
Mom & Dad –
Coming soon is the day, I've dreamed of all my life.
I will then be marrying, becoming Michael’s wife.
I wanted to tell you how special, you two are to me.
You have made me what I am, and am ready to be.
That night I will sleep, with dreams of bygone days,
My loving, carefree childhood, and of my childish ways.
Then I will awake, with dreams of things to come,
What my life will be, and who I will become.
With the morning I will have, emotions flowing free,
I just wanted you to know, I'll need you there with me
Your strength and love will guide me, as I become the bride,
As I start this precious journey, I need you by my side.
As I stand with Dad, at the beginning of the aisle
Please look at me dear Mom; I'll need to see your smile.
Your smile and Dad's arm will help to steady me,
As I take this blessed step, for God and all to see.
I'll always be your daughter, and your love I'll always need,
Though we are starting a new chapter, planting a new seed.
Michael is my love, my life, my everything to me,
And he will be beside me, as we tackle what will be.
So right before my wedding day, I say these words to you,
Hoping that you realize, you're in everything I do.
On my wedding day I will pledge to Michael, my very heart and soul,
You have helped to mold me, and he will make me whole.
Thank you for all that you have done for me.
Love Your Daughter,
Lisa
kellwolfe Posted:

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I think its perfect and I just want you to know i am crying!

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