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OK, HOW DOES THIS SOUND?

Sept17Girl Posted:

OK, HOW DOES THIS SOUND?

where should we put our names? we are giving the rehearsal dinner - so it is at our house



“Practice Makes Perfect”



Please join us on September 16th in preparation for our wedding.

Rehearsal Dinner - 5p.m.

Strret name.
town, NY 11706

Ceremony Rehearsal to follow - 7:30p.m.

St. Patricks Church
Bay Shore, NY 11706


Please RSVP by September 3rd
631-555-5555
jenifer99 Posted:

Re: OK, HOW DOES THIS SOUND?

maybe after 'rehersal dinner to follow' you can put given by the bride and groom and your names?

julz33 Posted:

Re: OK, HOW DOES THIS SOUND?

Sounds good... you are doing the dinner before??? Make sure you leave enough time
randella Posted:

Re: OK, HOW DOES THIS SOUND?

Maybe you should change your wording a little to..

Please join us for a rehearsal dinner honoring..

your names

etc.
Sept17Girl Posted:

Re: OK, HOW DOES THIS SOUND?

yup, i have too, 7:30 was the only time left at the church : (

Sept17Girl Posted:

Re: OK, HOW DOES THIS SOUND?

julz - its nice - but to nice for a house party with the words cordially..............

jenifer99 Posted:

Re: OK, HOW DOES THIS SOUND?


Posted by randella

Maybe you should change your wording a little to..

Please join us for a rehearsal dinner honoring..

your names

etc.



i agree.....put 'honoring' and then your names and then you can put 'given by the bride and groom'

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