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Please help with STD

junebride!

Please help with STD

I've been working on these and thought I was done...even printed several. Now I'm not sure about the wording. Last line...should it be WHEN? THAT? should that word just be left out so line will start Cindy? I think it should really be ON WHICH but there's no way I'm writing that...too many syllables!!LOL

BTW In case you don't know, we got engaged in front of Cinderella's Castle in DisneyWorld!

In front of the castle, he asked her to wed.
She said yes with a tear and a smile!
Please save the date of the special day
When Cindy and Gregg will walk down the aisle!

June 26, 2005
Formal Invitation to follow

What do you think? Thanks for your help!

editeed to add engagement in front of castle!
JacnRob729

Re: Please help with STD

i think it sounds great!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Vicky1706

Re: Please help with STD

Ditto! I voted to leave it when!

Good luck!
Janine24

Re: Please help with STD

I would keep it the way it is... it sounds great... very cute!

wood2be

Re: Please help with STD

I love it just the way it is!

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