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Please Proof my Menu!!

Soon2BMrsD Posted:

Please Proof my Menu!!

i cant spell please just take a quick look for me!!
Thank you!!!!

Menu
Appetizer
Martini de Fritti
Martini Glass Rimmed with coconut shavings and filled with
Pineapple, Cantaloupe, honeydew, watermelon and berries
Coated with Midori.
Insalata
Traditional Caesar Salad with Croutons
Main Entrée
Choice of one of the following All served with a twice baked potato and Mixed Vegetables
Roasted Prime Ribs of Beef
Served with natural au jus
Grilled Norwegian Salmon
Served with tomato Basil Salsa
Chicken Francaise
Chicken breast with traditional Wine, Lemon & butter Sauce
Upon completion of your meal the staff will offer seconds
Of the 3 main entrees
Dessert
Wedding Cake
Yellow Cake with Cannoli or Chocolate pudding
Ice-Cream Sunday Bar

Vegetarian and Children’s Menu Available upon Request!
Cutechef729 Posted:

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I think spelling looks pretty good but there are some things that are capitalized and others that are not. For example the tomato isn't capitalized but the next word is. I think that it would look better if it was consistent. I might get rid of Main and just have Entree since it might flow better. I'm sorry if I'm being picky, I'm a chef.
Cutechef729 Posted:

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Oooh..Sunday should be Sundae

Soon2BMrsD Posted:

Re: Please Proof my Menu!!

oh your good!! thank you so much!

Soon2BMrsD Posted:

Re: Please Proof my Menu!!

is this better??

Menu
Appetizer
Martini de Frutti
Martini Glass Rimmed with Coconut Shavings and filled with Pineapple,
Cantaloupe, Honeydew, Watermelon, and Berries Coated with Midori.
Insalata
Traditional Caesar Salad with Croutons
Main Entrée
Choice of one of the following. All Served with a Twice Baked
Potato and Mixed Vegetables.
Roasted Prime Ribs of Beef
Served with natural au jus
Grilled Norwegian Salmon
Served with tomato basil salsa
Chicken Francaise
Chicken breast with traditional Wine, Lemon & Butter Sauce
Dessert
Wedding Cake
Yellow Cake with Cannoli Filling or Chocolate Pudding Filling.
Ice Cream Sundae Bar

Vegetarian and Children’s Menu Available Upon Request!

babygirlb Posted:

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I would use a capital B for breast.

colleen1117 Posted:

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hmmm - first off - sounds SO YUMMY!!! can i come?
so - regarding caps again - what if you pick an all cap font...this way you dont have to worry about it...
for example you have
Lemon & Butter Sauce capitalized but not
natural au jus or tomato basil salsa


also you have 'Coated' capitalized but not 'filled '


don't worry i am the world WURST speller (yes - that was an intentional joke :) ) i would do an 'all cap' version
Soon2BMrsD Posted:

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ok thanks!!! i will look into an all caps or if not i will co through with a fine tooth comb!

colleen1117 Posted:

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again - sounds really really yummy though! :) :)

Soon2BMrsD Posted:

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thanks!! i really appreciate it!

AlyNJoe Posted:

Re: Please Proof my Menu!!

I got distracted from the spelling because everything sounds so good!!
I LOOOOVE cannoli filling, I think I def want it for my cake too.

The biggest thing I caught was the Sunday/Sundae also.

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