Please PROOF my wording!!

JimmysBride Posted: Jun 19, 2004 10:21 AM

Please PROOF my wording!!

Thanks!! I'm not sure about capitalization in particular please help with that! (There is no separate reception card, it goes right on the invite cause it's a scroll)

Sandra Middle Last

and

James Middle Last II

together with their parents
request the honour of your presence at their marriage
Saturday, the ninth of October
Two thousand and four
at two o’clock in the afternoon

Our Lady of the Assumption
1 Molloy Street
Copiague, New York

Reception to Follow
half past 6 o’clock in the evening

The SandCastle
519 Franklin Avenue
Franklin Square, New York

ETA: Okay, I capitalized the T in two...

futuremrspfm Posted: Jun 19, 2004 10:29 AM

Re: Please PROOF my wording!!

The T in the two thousand and four needs to have a capital. Everything else is fine, but I don't know if I would put the words 'to follow' after 'Reception', because it is not immediately after the ceremony. I am not sure about that one though.

LIJuneBride Posted: Jun 19, 2004 10:42 AM

Re: Please PROOF my wording!!

I think it looks good as is, but my personal taste I would write out the church address as 'One Molloy Street' and I would add 'RC Church' after the name of the church.