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RD Wording-- This look ok??
randella Posted: Oct 28, 2004 09:55 PM+
randella MEMBER SINCE: 8/04 TOTAL POSTS : 4681 WEDDING DATE: Apr 16, 2005
Posted: Oct 28, 2004 09:55 PM bride-minus.png

RD Wording-- This look ok??

How does this look? Is it bad that the second part rhymes and nothing else does?? I like that it is kinda cute.. wanted this invite to be a little less serious.

BTW-- this is given by all our parents-- from the entire 'wedding budget pool'.

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Join us as we honor our children
Randi and Matthew
On the eve of their wedding

We will toast their life
The night before
They become husband and wife

Friday, April 15th 2005
At 7:30 PM
Trattoria Diane
21 Byrant Avenue
Roslyn, NY

RSVP by April 1st
to contact info

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TracyInQueens Posted: Oct 28, 2004 10:02 PM+
TracyInQueens MEMBER SINCE: 6/04 TOTAL POSTS : 3294 WEDDING DATE: Oct 15, 2004
Posted: Oct 28, 2004 10:02 PM bride-minus.png

Re: RD Wording-- This look ok??

I like it.

Are you going to put church info on yours? I didn't, and I had people calling me, saying, 'Isn't there something in the chuch too?'
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randella Posted: Oct 28, 2004 10:10 PM+
randella MEMBER SINCE: 8/04 TOTAL POSTS : 4681 WEDDING DATE: Apr 16, 2005
Posted: Oct 28, 2004 10:10 PM bride-minus.png

Re: RD Wording-- This look ok??

Um... well, we are jewish so if we put a church on there, we'd probably confuse people more!!

It's just a dinner-- for close friends and family the night before the wedding.

So the rhyming-- ok??
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belle22274 Posted: Oct 28, 2004 10:12 PM+
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Re: RD Wording-- This look ok??

I think the rhyming is great! Cute but not too kitchy.
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becks23 Posted: Oct 29, 2004 12:01 AM+
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Re: RD Wording-- This look ok??

I love it!!
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Janine24 Posted: Oct 29, 2004 12:09 AM+
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Posted: Oct 29, 2004 12:09 AM bride-minus.png

Re: RD Wording-- This look ok??

cute...
I would put 'husband and wife' on the next line...
It helps out the rhyme...
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